I forgot to include the following few sentences. I really hope you can have a look at them, too. Thank you very much.
1) In the summer I go on boat trips with my mum to see the whales and the dolphins. I keep a diary in which I include information about them.
2)I hope I'll be able to study them in the future.
3) I'm a sunny and true (better: faithful) person. I do karate once a week. I like staying at home by myself.
4) I have many hobbies among which tennis, dance (dancing?), skiing and horse-riding.
5) As for food, I don't like spinach, peas or bananas but I like pizza and pasta.
6) In this paragraph I included only the first part of my student's profile. I'll write more in my next one.
7) In my free-time I like shooting with my model gun. I also like playing a trading card game (?) called "pingu".
8) I don't like wearing sweatpants (or tracksuit bottoms), shirts or sweaters.
9) Remember to use the gerund after verbs of likes and dislikes (?). I won't check your paragraphs any longer unless you type them on your computer.
10) I have an hour for lunch. How much time do you have for lunch?
9. Did (?) mean you didn't understand using a gerund after verbs of likes and dislikes?
I like walking in the rain.
John absolutely dislikes getting up at 4 am.
Sra
Sure, here are the explanations for each sentence:
1) To include the few sentences you forgot, you can simply add them to the text you have already written. A diary is a great way to document your experiences, and in this case, you can write about the boat trips you take with your mom to see whales and dolphins in the summer.
2) If you hope to study whales and dolphins in the future, you can mention that in your paragraph. It shows your interest and aspiration.
3) Here, you can describe your personality and interests. You mention being a sunny and true (faithful) person, doing karate once a week, and enjoying staying at home by yourself. This gives the reader more insight into who you are.
4) This sentence highlights some of your hobbies. You can mention that you have many hobbies, including tennis, dance (or dancing), skiing, and horse-riding.
5) When it comes to food, you can express your likes and dislikes. For example, you can mention not liking spinach, peas, or bananas, but liking pizza and pasta.
6) In this sentence, you state that you have only included the first part of your student's profile. This implies that you will write more about it in the next paragraph.
7) Here, you mention some of your favorite activities in your free time. You can clarify that you enjoy shooting with a model gun and playing a trading card game called "pingu".
8) This sentence states your preferences for clothing. You can mention that you don't like wearing sweatpants, shirts, or sweaters.
9) In this sentence, you remind the reader to use the gerund (the -ing form of a verb) after verbs of likes and dislikes. This is a grammatical tip to help improve the writing style. You can also add that you won't be checking the paragraphs anymore unless they are typed on a computer.
10) The final sentence asks a question about lunchtime. You can mention that you have an hour for lunch and then ask the reader how much time they have for lunch. This creates a conversational element in your paragraph.
Remember, these explanations are based on understanding the context and purpose of the sentences. Feel free to adjust and personalize the content according to your needs.