Can you please check if it is everything right?
Thank you.
1.I live in a small country village. My brother is a primary school student.
2.My parents are employees.
3.I’m a student at (of?) a technical high school with an emphasis on science.
4.I like running. I run in (for) a local team. I hate staying at home for many hours (better: spending time at home?), reading a book (or books) and going for a walk in the town centre (for a stroll) with my friends.
5.I don’t like staying on my own but with other people together.
6.I love Formula 1 but I also like other sports such as skiing, tennis and swimming.
7.In my family there are four people: my mum, my dad, my sister and I (NOT ME).
8.I don’t like some kinds of vegetables and fruits.
9Go to the end of the corridor, through the door, then left. You’ll see the school café on your left.
10.I have volleyball practice twice a week. We play a match on Saturdays.I live in a three-storey house. I often go hiking in the countryside to get some fresh air and enjoy the countryside.
5. but together with other people.
Everything else OK and GOOD on (NOT ME!)
Sra
I'll be picky!!
6.I love Formula 1 racing, but I also like other sports, such as skiing, playing tennis, and swimming.
10. How can you rephrase this so that "countryside" doesn't appear twice in the same sentence?
1. To check if everything is right, we can go through each sentence and evaluate it.
- Sentence 1: "I live in a small country village. My brother is a primary school student." This sentence is grammatically correct and conveys the information clearly. It seems to be correct.
- Sentence 2: "My parents are employees." This sentence is grammatically correct and states that the speaker's parents are employees. There is no further context provided to determine if there should be any more information, so we assume this is correct.
- Sentence 3: "I’m a student at (of?) a technical high school with an emphasis on science." This sentence seems to be missing some information. It is not clear if there is a specific technical high school mentioned or if it is just a generic statement. Without more context, it is difficult to determine if this sentence is correct.
- Sentence 4: "I like running. I run in (for) a local team. I hate staying at home for many hours (better: spending time at home?), reading a book (or books) and going for a walk in the town centre (for a stroll) with my friends." This sentence is grammatically correct but could benefit from some improvements in terms of clarity and style. It is generally correct.
- Sentence 5: "I don’t like staying on my own but with other people together." This sentence seems to have some grammatical issues. It can be improved by saying "I don't like staying on my own; I prefer being with other people."
- Sentence 6: "I love Formula 1 but I also like other sports such as skiing, tennis, and swimming." This sentence is grammatically correct and states the speaker's preferences for sports. It seems to be correct.
- Sentence 7: "In my family, there are four people: my mum, my dad, my sister, and I (NOT ME)." This sentence is grammatically correct and provides information about the speaker's family. It seems to be correct.
- Sentence 8: "I don’t like some kinds of vegetables and fruits." This sentence is grammatically correct and conveys the speaker's dislike for certain types of vegetables and fruits. It seems to be correct.
- Sentence 9: "Go to the end of the corridor, through the door, then left. You’ll see the school café on your left." This sentence provides directions and seems grammatically correct. It seems to be correct.
- Sentence 10: "I have volleyball practice twice a week. We play a match on Saturdays. I live in a three-story house. I often go hiking in the countryside to get some fresh air and enjoy the countryside." This sentence includes several statements about the speaker's activities, living arrangement, and hobbies. It seems to be correct.
Overall, most of the sentences seem to be correct, but there are a few that could be improved for clarity or grammar.