My english is very very bad ,please helpm me to fix this paragraph.
To catch the king interest, every night she must come up with unique and fresh idea.
Mercy and Wisdom is very important elements in her stories and how different characters of the stories succeed to save their lives by intelligence and acumen. In the story of “The story of the fisherman and the Demon” The fisherman grand mercy to the demon and set him free at the end of the story. In the Old man’s tale a man of demon spares his brother’s life by asking his wife to change them for the short time. These are example of those who granted forgiveness after the short punishment.
By all the lesson of betrayal and mercy in her tales, shaharzad intend to show her husband that every one commit mistakes there is nothing could be better to grand forgiveness to someone. Beside hers stories, she was also seeking forgiveness and mercy to the king.
Why english is a hard language?
All foreign languages are difficult, although perhaps English is harder than some other languages. I suggest you pay very close attention to what you're typing. For instance, you spelled English correctly in your above post, but you misspelled it in the School Subject box.
I'll get you started --
To catch the king's interest, every night she must come up with a unique and fresh idea.
Mercy and Wisdom are very important elements in her stories. Different characters of the stories save their lives by intelligence and acumen. In the story of “The Story of the Fisherman and the Demon,” the fisherman granted mercy to the demon and set him free at the end.
Please carefully proofread and edit the rest of this paragraph. If you repost your edited version, we'll be glad to check it again.
Thanks for help .
And I try to do better and I want to change (Intend to show )what other word I can use for this sentense.
In the “Old man’s tale” a husband of demon spares his brother’s life by asking his wife to change them for the short time. These stories are example of those who granted forgiveness after the short punishment. By using lesson of betrayal and mercy, Shaharzad intend to show her husband that every human being can commit mistakes but there is nothing could be nice to granding forgiveness to someone. Through different characters, she was trying to mold him because she was also seeking forgiveness and mercy to her husband .
This is better. :-)
In the “Old man’s Tale,” Demon's husband spares his brother’s life by asking his wife to change them for the short time. These stories are examples of those who are granted forgiveness after a short punishment. By using lessons of betrayal and mercy, Shaharzad intended to show her husband that every human being can commit mistakes, but there is nothing better than granting forgiveness to someone. Through different characters, she was trying to mold him because she was also seeking forgiveness and mercy for (from?) her husband .
What is your first language?
My first language is Urdu .
I am from pakistan.
Thanks for the information. Learning English with a completely different form of writing must be really difficult.
To improve your paragraph, here is the corrected version:
To capture the king's interest, she must come up with unique and fresh ideas every night. Mercy and wisdom are important elements in her stories, showcasing how different characters use intelligence and cunning to save their lives. In the story "The fisherman and the Demon," the fisherman shows great mercy to the demon and sets him free at the end. In "The Old Man's Tale," a man spares his brother's life by asking his wife to exchange their lives temporarily. These examples demonstrate forgiveness after a short period of punishment.
Through the lessons of betrayal and mercy in her tales, Shahrazad intends to show her husband that everyone makes mistakes, and it is best to grant forgiveness to others. In addition to her stories, she is also seeking forgiveness and mercy from the king.