Can you find 20 errors in these paragraphs?
Why are great numbers of students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers. Benjamin Franklin said; A penny saved is a penny earned”. This principle applies to the american and foreign online student. Todays students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters and supplies.
The fluctuating cost of gasoline in the united states is one reason online courses appeal to axia college students. They would rather cushion there financial nest eggs than to spend money on replacing worn tires or risking icy road conditions.
Students also realize that a traditional college requires them to purchase numerous books however, online courses provide the majority of their course materials within the virtual classroom. A student may save hundreds of dollars on textbooks during one block of courses.
Additionally online courses are convenient for parents and caregivers. College students who are responsible for children or aging parents must rely on outside help. An online student is able to avoid the high costs of hiring people to take care of their loved ones.
Lastly, an online student does not have to purchase supplies. Pencils, pens, paper, erasers, backpacks staplers, and paper clips are all needed in traditional courses. The online student needs only one tool to complete their college degree; a home computer. A computer is an online students conduit to class and to all the materials he or she needs.
Franklin D. roosevelt exclaimed that, “Happiness is not the mere possession of money.” He wanted Americans to understand that the joy of achievement is the path to happiness. Yet, even President Roosevelt would agree that earning an online college degree is a financially wise decision.
I found only 19.
I think the point is, CAN YOU FIND THEM?
I found 18.
Why are great numbers of students choosing to pursue their college degrees using their home computers. (?) Benjamin Franklin said; (,) (“)A penny saved is a penny earned (.)”. This principle applies to the american (American) and foreign online student. Todays (Today’s) students choose to take online courses to save money on transportation, books, babysitters (,) and supplies. 7
The fluctuating cost of gasoline in the united states (United States) is one reason online courses appeal to axia (Axia) college students. They would rather cushion there (their) financial nest eggs than to spend money on replacing worn tires or risking icy road conditions. 3
Students also realize that a traditional college requires them to purchase numerous books (.) however (However), online courses provide the majority of their course materials within the virtual classroom. A student may save hundreds of dollars on textbooks during one block of courses. 2
Additionally (,) online courses are convenient for parents and caregivers. College students who are responsible for children or aging parents must rely on outside help. An online student is able to avoid the high costs of hiring people to take care of their loved ones. 1
(Lastly,) an online student does not have to purchase supplies. Pencils, pens, paper, erasers, backpacks (,) staplers, and paper clips are all needed in traditional courses. The online student needs only one tool to complete their college degree; a home computer. A computer is an online students (student’s) conduit to class and to all the materials he or she needs. 3
Franklin D. Roosevelt (Roosevelt) exclaimed that, “Happiness is not the mere possession of money.” He wanted Americans to understand that the joy of achievement is the path to happiness. (Yet,) even President Roosevelt would agree that earning an online college degree is a financially wise decision. 2
Can you let me know if I have any wrong and what ones I might be missing?
degree: a home Use a colon.
(Roosevelt) exclaimed, “Happiness Omit "that."
To find 20 errors in the paragraphs, we need to carefully read through the text and identify any grammar, punctuation, or spelling mistakes. Here are 20 errors that I found:
1. "american" should be capitalized as "American."
2. There should not be a semicolon after "said."
3. "Todays" should be "Today's" to indicate possession.
4. "axia" should be capitalized as "Axia."
5. "there" should be "their" to indicate possession.
6. "college" should be capitalized as "College."
7. "however," should not be followed by a comma.
8. "majority" should be "the majority" for clarity.
9. "textbooks" should be hyphenated as "text-books."
10. "during" should be followed by "a block" instead of "one block."
11. "Additionally" should not be followed by a space before "online."
12. "College" should be capitalized as "College."
13. "online" should be capitalized as "Online."
14. "people" should be capitalized as "People."
15. "Lastly" should be followed by a comma.
16. "An online student" should be followed by a comma.
17. "tool" should be pluralized as "tools."
18. "franklin" should be capitalized as "Franklin."
19. "roosevelt" should be capitalized as "Roosevelt."
20. "college" should be capitalized as "College."
Please note that there may be other possible errors or variations in style that could be corrected, but these 20 are the most apparent ones.