Can you please check these other sentences for me? Thank you very much for your invaluable help.

1) Portia disguises herself as a judge and Nerissa as her clerk. They come to court to defend Antonio unknown of their husbands.
2) Portia advises Shylock to be merciful to Antonio. Shylock refuses her request and admits he wants the bond because he hates Antonio.
3)Antonio's friends try to persuade him not to take the pound of flesh.
4) Portia says that according to the law of Venice Shylock will lose all his property for having conspired against the life of a Venetian. She adds that the Duke can have him executed.
5)The Duke says that he will give Shylock his life but his property will go to Antonio and to the state.
6) Antonio suggests that Shylock should promise to leave all his wealth to Lorenzo and Jessica. Furthermore, he must convert to Christianity.
8)As a sign of their friendship Portia asks Antonio to give her his gloves and Bassanio his ring.
9) That was the ring she had given Bassanio at Belmont as a sign of her love. Bassanio agrees to take off the ring and orders Graziano to give it to Portia.

1) Portia disguises herself as a judge, and Nerissa, as her clerk. They come to court to defend Antonio, unbeknownst to their husbands.

2) Portia advises Shylock to be merciful to Antonio. Shylock refuses her request and admits he wants the bond because he hates Antonio.

3)Antonio's friends try to persuade him not to take the pound of flesh.

4) Portia says that according to the law of Venice Shylock will lose all his property for having conspired against the life of a Venetian. She adds that the Duke can have him executed.

5)The Duke says that he will give Shylock his life, but his property will go to Antonio and to the state.

6) Antonio suggests that Shylock promise to leave all his wealth to Lorenzo and Jessica. Furthermore, he <~~he = who? must convert to Christianity.

8)As a sign of their friendship, Portia asks Antonio to give her his gloves and Bassanio his ring.

9) That was the ring she had given Bassanio at Belmont as a sign of her love. Bassanio agrees to take off the ring and orders Graziano to give it to Portia.

Read carefully and compare with your sentences. I've made some corrections.

Sure! I'd be happy to check these sentences for you and provide any necessary corrections or improvements.

1) Portia disguises herself as a judge, and Nerissa disguises herself as her clerk. They come to court to defend Antonio without their husbands' knowledge.

2) Portia advises Shylock to show mercy to Antonio, but Shylock refuses her request and admits that he wants the bond because he hates Antonio.

3) Antonio's friends try to persuade him not to claim the pound of flesh.

4) Portia explains that, according to the law of Venice, Shylock will lose all his property for conspiring against the life of a Venetian. She adds that the Duke has the authority to have him executed.

5) The Duke declares that he will spare Shylock's life, but his property will be given to Antonio and the state.

6) Antonio suggests that Shylock should promise to leave all his wealth to Lorenzo and Jessica and also convert to Christianity.

7) As a sign of their friendship, Portia asks Antonio for his gloves, and Bassanio for his ring.

8) That was the ring Portia had given Bassanio in Belmont as a symbol of her love. Bassanio agrees to remove the ring and instructs Graziano to give it to Portia.

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