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The Pseudolus is a tricky slave .Even his master‘s son named Callidorus need his help. Callidorus is wealthy lovesick young man but unfortunately he depend on pseudolus‘s ideas to get his young salve girl friend , named Phoenicium . "Help me: what should I send this man / To stop my girl from going on sale?"
He is wealthy man but he has no power he gave all authority to his family servant. Callidorus ‘s character shows that he wealthy may not always be powerful and intelligence . It is amazing how pseudolus is controlling the other charachters in the play by using his cunning manner.
It is able to be appreciating that how Pseudolus complete all tasks by his intelligence. I think being a salve, no one can dare to compete powerful and wealthy authorities. But he did .He wins the bet with simo and he also gets the girl .As well as about the Ballio and Callidorus, it is good example that power and wealth have a potential to be corrupt and power can’t get succeeds all the time .It is the intelligence which can defeat the powerful man too like the pseudolus did.
Sure! Here's the corrected paragraph:
"The Pseudolus is a tricky slave. Even his master's son, named Callidorus, needs his help. Callidorus is a wealthy, lovesick young man, but unfortunately, he depends on Pseudolus's ideas to win over his young slave girl friend, named Phoenicium. "Help me: what should I send this man to stop my girl from being sold?" Despite his wealth, Callidorus lacks power and has given all authority to his family servant. Callidorus's character shows that wealth does not always equate to power and intelligence. It is amazing to see how Pseudolus manipulates the other characters in the play with his cunning ways.
It is truly admirable how Pseudolus accomplishes all his tasks through his intelligence. Being a slave, challenging powerful and wealthy figures is usually unthinkable. But he takes on the challenge and succeeds. He wins the bet with Simo and also manages to win over the girl. Moreover, the example of Ballio and Callidorus shows that power and wealth have the potential to corrupt and that power alone cannot guarantee success. It is intelligence that can defeat even the most powerful individuals, just as Pseudolus did."