On the way to Spo1 Park, I saw clothes on sale, which were cheap clothes. From the street vender, I bought some clothes before. This day, I bought 6 clothes at 20,000 won. I could buy the size 35 trousers, which were fit for my waist, though the trousers were kind of big for me. I could find the entrance to Spo1 Park. At the front desk, I paid the money for using the swimming pool of Spo1 Park. My wife entered the pool through the entrance for women. I entered the pool through the entrance for men. After changing clothes, I met her. I was wearing a swimming cap and a swimming trunk. Those who didn't wear swimming caps were not allowed to enter the pool. There were many people in the pool including small children on a tube. They looked happy. My wife was a good swimmer. She even dived to the floor of the poor and came out after swimming. I learned how to swim the backstroke. She could do the backstroke well. I could swim the backstroke a little, though it's not easy to swim on the back in the pool. After about one hour, I went out. We met again and went to a restaurant.

Question

On the way to Spo1 Park, I saw clothes on sale, which were cheap clothes. From the street vender, I bought some clothes before. This day, I bought 6 clothes at 20,000 won. I could buy the size 35 trousers, which were fit for my waist, though the trousers were kind of big for me. I could find the entrance to Spo1 Park. At the front desk, I paid the money for using the swimming pool of Spo1 Park. My wife entered the pool through the entrance for women. I entered the pool through the entrance for men. After changing clothes, I met her. I was wearing a swimming cap and a swimming trunk. Those who didn't wear swimming caps were not allowed to enter the pool. There were many people in the pool including small children on a tube. They looked happy. My wife was a good swimmer. She even dived to the floor of the poor and came out after swimming. I learned how to swim the backstroke. She could do the backstroke well. I could swim the backstroke a little, though it's not easy to swim on the back in the pool. After about one hour, I went out. We met again and went to a restaurant.

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Answer 1

Good overall. Here are a few little corrections:

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vendor

6 articles of clothing (not 6 clothes)

which fit my waist (not which were fit for my waist)

swimming trunks (not a swimming trunk)

to swim on my back (not to swim on the back)
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Nice!

Answer 2

Thank you for sharing the passage with me. It seems like a description of your visit to Spo1 Park, where you encountered various activities such as buying clothes, entering the park, and swimming in the pool. It's nice to hear that you and your wife had a good time.

If you have any specific questions or if there's anything you would like me to explain further, please let me know.