Describe the girl in each picture.

How does she look? She looks happy in the first picture. What about the girl in Picture 2? I think she looks angry or upset. Then what about the girl in the last picture? She looks surprised. Good job!

(Would you check the passage above? Are they all grammatical?)

Yes, all are grammatically correct and read very well! Nice job!! =)

Yes, the passage is grammatically correct. Each sentence is written correctly and conveys the intended meaning. Well done!