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Revise the folloing sentences to create parallel constructions.
(Question)
Some students hate math; some students dislike math, and math is liked by other students.

(my answer)
Some students hate math, some dislike math, and some like math.

every way I have tried it just doesn't sound correct. Please help??

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asked by Rita
  1. Try this: Some students hate math and others merely dislike it, however, many enjoy math.

    posted by GuruBlue
  2. Thank you very much. It reads much better and is probably proper, where mine..not as much.

    posted by Rita
  3. got 1 more for you...
    To succeed in the new economy, workers will have to learn thoughout their careers, adapt to changing circumstances, and self-motivation will be needed.

    this is my version...

    To succeed in the new economy workers have to learn throughout their career, adapt to changing circumstances and be self-motivated.

    same problem..creat parallel constructions.

    Thank you so much.

    posted by Rita
  4. Your revision is good -- you've changed that last one so you have "parallel" verbs: learn, adapt, be

    Your sentence will be better if you put a comma after "circumstances."

    posted by Writeacher
  5. if you wanted to find the definition of 6/25-four over five what common denominator should you choose?why?

    posted by Anonymous

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