help with compelling and counter argument on school violence
You've just discovered the flaw in you thesis statement. You haven't given an opinion that can be defended and refuted.
Do you want to propose a zero-tolerance for any type of school disruption?
yes, Zero tolerence is not allowed
What do you mean that "zero tolerance is not allowed?"
Zero tolerance means that certain behaviors are not allowed. Perpetrators are immediately removed from the school setting
I am saying that the schools are not allowing any type of voilence for pushing to weapons.
You may want to rewrite your thesis statement to say that schools should adopt zero-tolerance policies toward all forms of bullying, violence, and class disruptions.
Do you think you can write a paper with that thesis statement?
I urge you to do some research on zero tolerance in schools.
thank you
You're welcome. Good luck!
How is this? Each day too many of our children go to school to learn, only to witness some form of school violence – schools need to adopt a zero-tolerance policy toward violence of all forms of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, trash talking, and the secret carrying and displaying of dangerous weapons, to name a few.
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counter arguments?
I plan on supporting my thesis with strong arguments that support my claims. I plan on using facts, studies, statistics, quotes, and more information from credible sources with high levels of expertise on this subject. I will use all of this information from these credible sources as premises to make my arguments strong. I plan on making my arguments and counter arguments compelling by including information on the topic that is not common knowledge. I will also make the arguments and counter arguments compelling by using opposing viewpoints coming from sources with high levels of expertise on the subject. I will note these opposing viewpoints in my paper, and then provide evidence to refute them. I will also be sure to point out any bias or fallacies in these counter arguments. By using strong, compelling arguments and rebutting viewpoints that oppose my own, I should be able to provide strong support for the thesis in my research paper.
This should be your thesis statment:
Schools need to adopt a zero-tolerance policy toward all forms of bullying, disrespect toward authority figures, trash talking, and the carrying of dangerous weapons.
Your answer to the question is good.