Do you need to make it longer or is it time to tie it together?
As someone who moved to the exact opposite - from the suburbs of Cincinnati to a crappy, noise-filled small town in Taiwan where people can't drive, I understood this completely and loved the essay.
I think somehow tying it together and finishging it up would be perfect at this point unless you're required to write more in your essay.
Matt
To answer your question, i do have to write more. and after that paragraph is my conlcusion which is below:
Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.
Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.
Prior to my arrival to America, I thought life here was going to be hard to adjust and I was right. The environment was too quiet and empty, learning to speak English was difficult, and getting used to going to school was a challenge. However, I overcame the obstacles by giving life here a second chance and I saw myself enjoying living in this country. One of the lessons I learned was not to judge too quickly before trying out new things. This experience helped me change into a confident and responsible young adult who loves living in the United States of America.
Based on the information you provided, it seems like you have already written your conclusion to your essay. In your conclusion, you have summarized your experiences and growth, and you have provided a clear takeaway from your time in the United States.
If you feel that your essay is already well-rounded and complete, it may not be necessary to make it longer. However, if you have specific essay requirements that need to be met, such as a minimum word count or specific sections that need to be addressed, you may need to add more content accordingly.
In any case, it's always a good idea to review your essay to ensure that it flows smoothly and cohesively. You can tie everything together by revisiting your main points, reinforcing your thesis statement, and providing a succinct and impactful conclusion. Additionally, proofreading your essay for any grammar or punctuation errors can help improve its overall quality.