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what is wrong with these two parts

1) his tone is triumphing

2) by telling his achievement(am i missing of between telling and his)

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asked by flame
  1. 1) "triumphant", an adjective, would be a better word than "triumphing". Tones do not engage in battle.

    2) "of" is optional at that location

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