When Joshua realizes that his persuasive memo doesn't counteract the most obvious probable objections, he adds two additional paragraphs. What part of the writing process does this activity represent?

Planning
Gathering
Revising
Editing

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Is he editing the document by adding paragraphs. I beleive so, but he could also be adding the paragraphs while he is revising the document.

When you revise a document you add paragraphs. It could also happen when you edit.

But revising is probably the best answer.

Thank you Ms. Sue!!

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The activity of adding two additional paragraphs to a persuasive memo represents the phase of the writing process called "Revising".

Revising is the stage where writers review and modify their initial draft to improve its overall structure, content, and effectiveness. In this case, Joshua recognized that his memo didn't adequately address the most obvious probable objections, which indicates that he needs to revise his memo. By adding two additional paragraphs, he is making revisions to strengthen his argument and address those objections more effectively.