Terry realizes that the draft of her memo announcing a new suggestion system mentions who will be evaluating the suggestions on both the first and second pages, so she deletes the second reference and adds a little more to the first. What part of the writing process does this activity represent?

Planning
Writing
Revising
Editing

What do YOU think?

I believe is revising because she is not changing the the document grammatically.

I agree, revision.

The activity described represents the editing phase of the writing process. Editing involves reviewing and making changes to the content, structure, grammar, and style of a written work. In this case, Terry is making a change to the memo by deleting the second reference to who will be evaluating the suggestions and adding more to the first reference. This step helps to refine and improve the clarity and effectiveness of the writing before finalizing it.