Terry realizes that the draft of her memo announcing a new suggestion system mentions who will be evaluating the suggestions on both the first and second pages, so she deletes the second reference and adds a little more to the first. What part of the writing process does this activity represent?
Planning
Writing
Revising
Editing

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2. I believe is revising because she is not changing the the document grammatically.

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3. I agree, revision.

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