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My spanish teacher assigned us a project to write a children's book. I wrote a sorta different version of the boy who cried wolf. Can someone please help me correct my grammar? :]

(p.s. each number is a different page)

El Muchacha Que Grito El Perro

1. Érase rase una vez, había una niña que vivía con sus padres.
2. Un día ella caminaba solo en un bosque.
3. Ella vio un caracol y gritó <¡Mamá! ¡Papá! ¡Ayúdenme! ¡El Perro! ¡El Perro!">.
4. Sus padres oyó y llegaban.
5. Pero fue sólo un caracol. Su padre dijo <solamente grito ayuda cuando necesitan o gente lo demás no le creen cuando es real>.
6. Después de una hora, ella vio una tortuga y gritó <¡Mamá! ¡Papá! ¡Ayúdenme! ¡El Perro! ¡El Perro!">.
7. Sus padres oyó y llegaban, pero fue sólo una tortuga. Su madre dijo <solamente grito ayuda cuando necesitan o gente lo demás no le creen cuando es real>.
8. Después, Ella vio un perro y gritó <¡Mamá! ¡Papá! ¡Ayúdenme! ¡Ayúdenme! ¡El Perro! ¡El Perro!">.
9. Pero sus padres no llegaban porque no les creen.
10. El muchacha que grito el perro nunca más fue visto.

El Final

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  1. Gritó = Preterit 3rd person singular requires the accent mark.

    gritó = he/she/you-formal-singular shoutED, DID shout BUT
    grito = I shout, I DO shout, I AM shoutING

    1. Érase una vez = Once upon a time there was
    había = there was or there were
    (Drop había)

    2. sola = alone (adjective, feminine singular like the girl)
    sólo or solamente = only (adverb)

    3. Do you want "the dog" or just plain "dog?"

    4. plural subject = plural verb = oyeron plus diggerence between "llegaban" = they WERE arrivING vs. "llegaron" = DID arrive OR the difference between the Imperfect & the Preterit (completed action)

    5. EEK, without the English of what you are trying to say, I'm not sure how to correct this! You will have to provide the English.

    6. maybe OK

    7. same as #4 and again English for the last part, like #5

    8. maybe

    9. no llegaron porque no lo creyeron = did not arrive; did not believe it

    10. decide = girl? La muchacha que gritó "Perro" no fue vista jamás (stronger than nunca, at leasr in sound!)

    The End = El Fin

    Sra

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  2. THANKYOU SOOO MUCHH! :]

    5. But there was only a snail. Her dad said "only yell for help when you need it or else no one will believe you when you need help for real."

    7. Her parents heard and came, but there was only a turtle. Her mom said "only yell for help when you need it or else no one will believe you when you need help for real."

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  3. Here's Little Red Riding Hood..I got a 100 on mine

    Ricitos de Oro y los Tres Osos

    Cuando Ricitos de Oro era niña, ella iba a caminar. Ella vio una casita y fue en la casita. Primero, se sentó en la silla grande, entonces la silla mediana, y finalmente la silla pequeña. La silla pequeña estaba perfecta. Luego, Recitos de Oro tenía mucha hambre. Ricitos de Oro comió sopa de tres tazones. El tazón grande estaba caliente, el tazón mediana estaba frío, y el tazón pequeño estaba excelente. Después de comer, Ricitos de Oro estaba cansada. La cama grande estaba dura, la cama mediana estaba blanda, y la cama pequeña estaba muy cómoda. Entonces, los tres osos llegaron a su casa. Los tres osos dijeron que alguien sentó en las sillas, comió la sopa, y durmió en las camas. “Esta se explica fácilmente,” dijo el eso pequeño. “¡Ella esta en mi cama ahora!” Ricitos de Oro se despertó y grito “¡Ayúdame!” y corrió a su casa.

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  4. 5. But there was only a snail. Her dad said "only yell for help when you need it or else no one will believe you when you need help for real." = Pero sólo era un caracol. Su papá dijo: sólo grita (tú/familiar command) para ayuda cuando la necesitas o nadie te creerá cuando necesitas ayuda verdaderamente.

    7. Her parents heard and came, but there was only a turtle. Her mom said "only yell for help when you need it or else no one will believe you when you need help for real."

    Sy padres oyeron y llegaron, pero sólo había una tortuga. Su mamá dijo: "sólo grita para ayuda cuando la necesitas o nadie te creerá cuando necesitas verdaderamente.

    Sra

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