Can you check these sentences for me, please? Thank you very much in advance.

1) You mustn't speak in a loud voice in the library.
2) In Britain you must drive on the right.
3) A make-up artist is someone who puts make-up on actors' and actresses' faces.
4) A scriptwriter is someone who writes the text (and not "texts") for a film (and not films?), a play or a TV-programme.
5)I'm wearing: a black zip-up hoodie with a coloured design on it, a coloured T-shirt,
6) Popular clothes among teenagers are: blue skinny washed-out jeans, hoodies, V-neck T-shirts, multicolor (?) trainers
7) She is always smartly dressed. She dresses smartly. She wears smartly clothes.
8) You don't have to reserve a table at the (and not in the) restaurant.

  1. 👍
  2. 👎
  3. 👁
  1. Delete all in parentheses; delete the comma after "it" in #5 and insert "and"; delete the colon after "are" in #6; add commas after "blue" and "skinny" in #6; add period at the end of #6; delete the third sentence in #7.

    1. 👍
    2. 👎

Respond to this Question

First Name

Your Response

Similar Questions

  1. need help on word choice quick check unt 7 lesson7

    Use the sentences to answer the question. Kim is such a hardworking and energetic student. She smiled and jumped for joy when she found out she got an A on her algebra test. What is the tone of the sentences? (1 point) positive

  2. science

    In 3 to 5 sentences, analyze potential impacts of oceans on human populations as the result of climate change in the current century. can someone give me a link a website/article to where i can answer this question? i am trying to

  3. science

    can i get a link to a website that I can answer these writing prompts to? thank you in advance! In 3–5 sentences, explain the difference in good and bad atmospheric ozone and how each is distributed in Earth's atmosphere. In 3

  4. Accounting

    A check returned by a bank because the issuer's cash account balance could not cover the check is called a(n): a. Cancelled check b. Certified check c. Outstanding check d. NSF check

  1. Spanish #2

    Can someone check my sentences? Write four sentences about what you do when you go to a restaurant. Remember to mention how you go, what you do and what you order. Voy a la restaurante en coche. Yo pedir el pollo y la ensalada a

  2. English

    just can't figure these sentences out. have to rewrite these sentences, correcting the problem of incorrect omission.? 1. A liberal arts background is excellent for such professions as lawyers and doctors. 2. American colleges

  3. Language Arts

    1. Which of the following sentences has correct subject-verb agreement? A. A scarf or a hat keep you warm in the winter. B. Either Grandma or your brother pick your birthday gifts each year. C. Stacey and her sisters go to the

  4. Language Arts

    Hi! Can anyone check my answers please? Which type of sentence is shown below? Meet me outside after your ballet class. A. exclamatory sentence B. declarative sentence C. interrogative sentence D. imperative sentence**** Which of

  1. english

    Beginning writers tend to overuse _______, which quickly become monotonous A. long sentences B. complicated sentences C. short, simple sentences D. complex sentences

  2. English / Grammar

    I need help with the following grammar exercise. Rewrite the following sentences, focusing on the grammar area specified above the sentence. If the sentence is already correct, write No Change. Punctuating Sentences The goose bit

  3. English

    Could you please check these three sentences, please? 1) Describe the kind of technique adopted by 20-century writers to represent the unspoken activity of the mind. Provide an example of its use from the readings done in class.

  4. English / Grammar

    Please check the following sentences and let me know if they are correct. Thank you in advance!! Rewrite the following sentences, focusing on the grammar area specified before the sentence. If the sentence is already correct,

You can view more similar questions or ask a new question.