my is elderly people things
to start a presentation goes like this .............
'cities needs to provide services to all residents but espially to eldery people' because there population increases in future! city need 55 plus buildings to live and pavllion. they should make recreation center for activities,parties and ect...city needs to provide health care medical care for them
miss sue had give me 'answer'and i just added
but i am not sure i it is right way to say and check my grammar please
thanks
Cities (plural) need....especially (spelling) to elderly (spelling), as their population increases in the future.
A city (singular) needs....I do NOT understand "to live and pavillion"
The first word in a new sentence needs to be capitalized, as "They make recreation centers OR a recreation center.....etc. (correct spelling)
These are "some" of the grammatical errors above.
Sra
Certainly, I'd be happy to help you with your presentation! It looks like you've already written some key points about the services cities need to provide for elderly people. Let's go through your introduction and make some improvements together.
"Cities need to provide services to all residents, but especially to elderly people. This is crucial because the elderly population is expected to increase in the future. Therefore, it is essential for cities to have dedicated 55-plus buildings and pavilions where elderly individuals can live comfortably. Additionally, cities should establish recreation centers to offer various activities, parties, and other forms of entertainment for them. Lastly, providing adequate healthcare and medical services is also a priority."
Here are some suggestions to improve the grammar of your introduction:
- Capitalize the first letter of each sentence.
- Use commas to separate the main points in your statement.
- Add appropriate punctuation at the end of each sentence.
- Use proper sentence structure and grammar.
Remember to double-check your grammar and punctuation throughout your entire presentation for any further corrections and improvements.
I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any other questions or need further assistance.