Does this intro make sense:
You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can not fool all of the people all of the time. Therefore, the only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once. Time is the ally of truth, or the worst enemy of a liar, and revenge is having the truth presented to public and the liar made obvious. ”And thus the whirligig of time brings in his revenges.” What comes around goes around. With time, the truth will be revealed.
Many characters have experienced such situation in the novel, Twelfth Night.
I think it makes good sense. However, I would in your last sentence say, The characters "blank, blank and blank" ....
Ok. You want be to introduce that character before I start writing on them?
Would it still sound worte if I just took away the part about in twelfth night, and went straight to the characters?
You need the last sentence to introduce the exact topic you will be dealing with.
use the last sentence of your introduction to mention their names. The write one paragraph on how each of them were brought to the truth by time.
How would I continue this:
There has been a shipwreck off the coast of Illyria. Viola, a young woman in her late teens, has been saved, but there is no news about Sebastian, her twin brother. Viola is forced by the facts, to believe that her brother has drowned.
Good start...then you need to show how "time" brought the truth out.
ok......So I just have to give two more examples after this and then give a concluding statement relating to the thesis.
Thank-You
exactly
Should the conclusion also finish with a quote?
Nope... The conclusion looks at the 3 body paragraphs and say "if these are true, then what I learned from this is."
It essentially is what ideas you discovered regarding time and truth.
ok. Thanks.
After this, how do I add something about time. Should I go more indepth with the situation before bringing up the topic of time. Or should I say that she did not consider the fact the he still could be alive.
Paragraph:
There has been a shipwreck off the coast of Illyria. Viola, a young woman in her late teens, has been saved, but there is no news about Sebastian, her twin brother. Viola is forced by the facts, to believe that her brother has drowned.
This would be where you bring in how "time" solved the problem, right.
Is i important to add that I am talking about twelfth night and the characters I will be talking about in the intro, or is this fine:
You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can not fool all of the people all of the time. Therefore, the only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once. Time is the ally of truth, or the worst enemy of a liar, and revenge is having the truth presented to public and the liar made obvious. ”And thus the whirligig of time brings in his revenges.” What comes around goes around. With time, the truth will be revealed.
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Make sure you give credit for the quotation that is your first sentence. It needs to be in quotation marks, and then you must name Abraham Lincoln as the originator of that statement. http://www.quoteland.com/search.asp?query=you+can+fool+some+of+the+people
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It is always important to give credit to the original speaker or writer of a quotation. In this case, since you are using a famous quote often attributed to Abraham Lincoln, you should mention his name as the originator of the statement. The correct format would be:
"You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you can not fool all of the people all of the time." - Abraham Lincoln
Additionally, it would be helpful to introduce the quote by briefly explaining its significance or relevance to your topic.