Please correct the sentence below and make it an appropriate thesis statement. In this essay, I will argue that alternative medicine is popular and everyone should use it. As we learn more about the benefits of alternative medicine, patients should be allowed access to it as an option to traditional medical treatments where appropriate.

Question

Please correct the sentence below and make it an appropriate thesis statement. In this essay, I will argue that alternative medicine is popular and everyone should use it. As we learn more about the benefits of alternative medicine, patients should be allowed access to it as an option to traditional medical treatments where appropriate.

Answer 1

Which is you thesis sentence?

Answer 2

I think the thesis is aruging for alternative medicine and benefits as an option in place of traditional treatments

Answer 3

You still haven't posted a thesis sentence.

Study these sites carefully.

http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html

http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/

Answer 4

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Answer 5

The original sentence, "In this essay, I will argue that alternative medicine is popular and everyone should use it," could be revised to an appropriate thesis statement as follows:

"Given the growing understanding of the advantages of alternative medicine, patients should have access to it as a viable option alongside conventional medical treatments in suitable circumstances."