Thank you for your last corrections. Can you check these sentences, too?

Thank you very much in advance.
1) Go straight on (but not go straight on Crown Street?) but go along Crown Street.
2) Where is cinema in Crown Street and how do I get (can I use “arrive”?) there?
Do you know the cinema in Crown Street?
3) Is Crown Street the street (or road?) near the park? Yes, (it is or that’s right or both?)
No, it’s Main Street. Go along Liverpool Street and turn left. The cinema is at the end of that road ( can you use “street”?, on the right near the train station. You can’t miss it.
4) Can you start a sentence with “different is her love for Heathcliff. Or it would be better to say “differently, her love for Heathcliff transcends time and material existence).
5) Elizabeth has a different character from her sisters (better: Her character is different from that of her sisters)
6) Society impose (or imposes) a certain role on her?
7) What do you think about going to the cinema? Is it possible to use it instead of the usual “What about/how about going to the cinema?
8) They are staying at the Falcon Hotel and are having breakfast and lunch at the hotel (is “in the hotel” also possible?)
9) She is incapable of independent thought (and not thoughts?meaning she can think for herself?)

1. either & even straight down

2. the cinema on
3. both & the name says street, not road
4. Why not start with the subject: Her love is different?
5. OK
6. imposes (singular)
7. yes
8. yes
9. either but "thought" singular implies "not even one"

Sra

Here are the corrections and answers to your questions:

1) Go straight on (but not go straight on Crown Street?) but go along Crown Street.
Correction: "Go straight on" is correct. However, instead of "go along Crown Street," it would be more accurate to say "continue on Crown Street."

2) Where is the cinema on Crown Street and how do I get (can I use “arrive”?) there?
Correction and explanation: It would be better to ask "Where is the cinema located on Crown Street?" You can use both "get" and "arrive" interchangeably in this context.

3) Is Crown Street the street (or road?) near the park? Yes, (it is or that’s right or both?)
Correction and explanation: Instead of using "Yes, it is," it would be more appropriate to respond with either "Yes, that's right" or "Both." This confirms that Crown Street is indeed the street near the park. The rest of the directions provided are accurate.

4) Can you start a sentence with "Different is her love for Heathcliff"? Or would it be better to say "Differently, her love for Heathcliff transcends time and material existence"?
Correction and explanation: It would be better to use the second sentence: "Differently, her love for Heathcliff transcends time and material existence." Starting a sentence with "Different is her love for Heathcliff" might sound somewhat awkward.

5) Elizabeth has a different character from her sisters (better: Her character is different from that of her sisters).
Correction and explanation: Both sentences are correct. However, the second sentence "Her character is different from that of her sisters" is more formal and comprehensive.

6) Does society impose (or imposes) a certain role on her?
Correction: The verb "impose" needs to be in the singular form to match the subject "society." Therefore, it should be "Does society impose a certain role on her?"

7) What do you think about going to the cinema? Is it possible to use "it" instead of the usual "What about/how about going to the cinema"?
Correction and explanation: Yes, it is possible to use "it" instead of "What about" or "How about" in this context. So, the sentence can be rephrased as "What do you think about it?" when referring to going to the cinema.

8) They are staying at the Falcon Hotel and having breakfast and lunch at the hotel (is "in the hotel" also possible?).
Correction and explanation: Yes, it is possible to say "in the hotel" instead of just "at the hotel." Both versions are grammatically correct and convey the same meaning.

9) She is incapable of independent thought (and not thoughts? Meaning she can think for herself?).
Correction and explanation: You are correct. The sentence "She is incapable of independent thought" means that she is unable to think for herself. You should use the singular form "thought" instead of "thoughts."