It is the case that good communicators advance more quickly in the company.Which of the following would be the best revision of this sentence?
a) "Good communicators advance more quickly in the company."
b) "It is true that good communicators advance more rapidly in the company."
c) "There is evidence that has shown that good communicators advance more rapidly in the company."
d) "It is the case that good communicators advance faster in the company."
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Yes. A is the best answer.
The best revision of the sentence would be option a) "Good communicators advance more quickly in the company." This revision is concise and maintains the same meaning as the original sentence. Option b) adds unnecessary words, option c) repeats information unnecessarily, and option d) substitutes "faster" for "more quickly," which changes the nuance of the sentence slightly. So, the correct answer is a).
The best revision of the sentence would be option (a): "Good communicators advance more quickly in the company."
The original sentence is already clear and concise, so there is no need to add unnecessary words or qualifiers. Option (b) adds the phrase "It is true that," which doesn't add any meaningful information to the sentence. Option (c) includes the phrase "There is evidence that has shown that," which makes the sentence wordy and redundant. Option (d) replaces "faster" with "more rapidly," but both choices convey the same meaning, so there is no need to use the wordier option.
So, yes, option (a) is the correct answer.