Thank you very much for your help.
Here are some more sentences I need to prepare for tomorrow.
1) The mirror is presented as a truthful object. When someone is mirroring in it (is it correct: or "when someone looks at himself in it?) it reflects the truth (or "it portrays him objectively?)
2) The mirror tells (or says) that it is always in front of a pink wall and that sometimes faces and darkness separate him from that wall, which is part of his heart (or "which has become part of his heart)
3) The mirror is personified and he shows things exactly as they appear
4) A woman is crying watching at it/mirroring in it or looking at her
image in the mirror (which ones are possible?)because she is old now and the process of time on her face is terrible for her.
5)Policians were concerend with bribing (can I replace it with "corrupting"?) the electorate with money.
6) Virtue came to be seen both as a disposition of benevolence towards oneself and others and as a sensibility (or an interest) in man's innner and emotional side.
7) An external narrator tells the story from the outside.
8) A first-person narrator employs the "I" mode. Is it also correct to say "He is identified with "I", he tells the events in the first person?)
9) The external narrator tells events he has not taken part in. Can you say "he tells about events he ..."?
10) A litotes is a figure of speech in which (is where possible?) an affermative is expressed by negating its opposite
1. Bit of an argument here. The mirror reflects actuality; however what is seen is in the "eye of the beholder".
2 though 4.. need many fewer word and much more clarity.
#5. The electorate usually "bribe" the already "corrupt" politicians.
6. needs to be clarified
7.I would say, as an uninvolved viewer of the action.
8. Your first sentence if fine.
9. You can say "events to which he is merely a witness"
10. not where... where indicates a place. Check spelling-
1) When someone looks at themselves in the mirror, it reflects the truth. Alternatively, you can say "when someone mirrors themselves in it." either option works. For the second part of the sentence, using "portrays him objectively" is accurate.
2) The mirror communicates that it is always in front of a pink wall, and sometimes faces and darkness separate it from that wall, which has become part of its heart. This phrasing captures the personification of the mirror.
3) Correct, the mirror is personified and shows things exactly as they appear.
4) A woman is crying while looking at her image in the mirror. This phrasing captures the idea that she is observing herself in the mirror.
5) Yes, you can replace "bribing" with "corrupting" in the sentence about politicians and the electorate.
6) Virtue is seen as both a disposition of benevolence towards oneself and others, as well as an interest in man's inner and emotional side. In this case, "interest" fits better than "sensibility."
7) An external narrator tells the story from an outside perspective. Your phrasing is correct.
8) A first-person narrator employs the "I" mode. You can also say, "He identifies with the 'I' and tells the events in the first person."
9) Yes, you can say "he tells about events he has not taken part in" to convey that the external narrator describes events they didn't participate in.
10) A litotes is a figure of speech in which an affirmative is expressed by negating its opposite. Using "where" instead of "in which" in this sentence is not correct. "In which" is the appropriate phrase to use here.