i tried my best to coorrect this, but it still sounds wierd. the following paragraph is about the great gatsby, and how many celebrities relate to Gatsby.c can you please suggest ideas and help me make it sound more fluent.
I turn polar bears white And I will make you cry. I make guys have to pee And girls comb their hair. I make celebrities look stupid And normal people look like celebrities. I turn pancakes brown And make your champane bubble. If
Can some one proof read my short essay for gramatical errors, or just the anything in general. heres the question i am answering: Popular media from magazines to movies to television offer images, stories, and information that
can you please help me make this paragraph sound a little bit better. thanks!!!im taking about how power from fame and wealth make celebrites think like thir god. this eventually distrys them, or their carrer. Celebrities are
I am doing an intro paragraph of being on a pedal boat at a bay. My writing teacher said we had to make our stories interesting and make people want to read it and be fascinated with it. So, I started with: "Ahhh!!! We're going to
Any guidance as to where find answers to the following questions or any related ones would be super. Would a market for procuring organs lead to commodification of the human body? What do we do when there are not enough organs to
Many people are fascinated by outer space. School children learn about our solar system in school. Tv and radio announcers tell us what to watch for in the night sky. They tell us when the planets are brightest and whcih ones we