Can someone please proofread my spanish project?

Hi I'm a second year spanish student and we just learned about past and imperfect tenses. I'm having a little trouble since my teacher refuses to look over projects and would greatly appreciate any feedback. We are supposed to do a timeline of the important things that have happened in our lives using both tenses.

SPANISH
Yo volé en el avión a ir al Mundo de Disney. Mi madre y los abuelos vinieron con yo.
Yo era muy pequeña y no supe mucho. Yo era muy cansada y comía mucho.
Yo comencé el baloncesto en el quinto grado. Nosotros perdimos cada el jugo pero ganamos cuando nosotros fuimos más viejas.
Yo estaba muy emocionada a jugar porque yo no estaba muy bien. Mis padres sentían orgullosos de yo.
Mi hermana Tori nació en el hospital de Fort Atkinson. Ella tuvo muchos los visitantes y los regalos.
Yo no recordaba el día de su natalidad. Hacia sol y caliente.
Yo manejé por la primera vez en noveno grado a Elkhorn. Sr. Brown enseñó yo en mis lecciones.
Yo no quería a tener un accidente. Yo no sentía feliz o asustada cuando yo legía en el carro.
Yo asistí la preparatoria con mis amigos. Yo estudié en siete clases y un pasillo de estudio.
La tarea era muy difícil y estresante. Me gustaba mi maestra Sra. Weitzel.
En la escuela intermedia, mi padre trajo Lilly a mi escuela. Nosotros jugamos con ella hasta ella se dormió.
Ella era nos primera perra. Lilly no le gustaba a dormir en su jaula.
ENGLISH
I flew on an airplane to go to Disney World. My mom and my grandparents came with me.
I was very small and I did not know a lot. I was very tired and ate a lot.
I started basketball in the fifth grade. We lost every game but we won when we were older.
I was very exicited to play because I was not very good. My parents felt proud of me.
My sister Tori was born in Fort Atkinson Hospital. She had many visitors and presents.
I do not remember the day of her birth. The weather was sunny and hot.
I drove for the first time in the ninth grade at Elkhorn. Mr. Brown taught me in the lessons.
I did not want to have an accident. I did not feel happy or scared when I got in the car.
I attended high school with my friends. I studied in seven classes and a study hall.
The homework was very difficult and stressful. I liked my teacher Mrs. Weitzel.
In the middle school, my dad brought Lilly to my school. We played with her until she fell asleep.
She was our first dog. Lilly did not like to sleep in her cage.

Let's begin with the difference between the 2 past tenses.

The Preterit is for ACTION - something with a beginning, a middle and an ENDING. Imagine a camera taking still shots: / / / / / / / /
The English meaning is usually 2: hablé = I DID speak, I SPOKE.

The Imperfect is for DESCRIPTION - of course there was a beginning, but we are focusing on the MIDDLE and as far as we know, there may never have been an ending. Imagine a movie camera grinding away: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The English meaning of a verb will have 3. Yo hablaba = I WAS speakING, I USED TO speak and I SPOKE. (the third meaning is like the 2nd for the Preterit but with a BIG difference!

Because my eyes will not scan up and down, I've printed your project so I can read it better. Thank you for providing the English.

The English said: " In A plane" = Yo volé en un avión para ir al Mundo de Disney. Mi madre y mis (my) abuelos vinieron conmigo (with me)...."supe" has a special meaning in the Preterit = I found out, so you need "no sabía mucho." To be tired is a TEMPORARY condition and uses "estar" not "ser." Yo estaba muoy cansada y comí mucho. (check the English meaning above = I ate/did eat vs I was eating, used to eat.)

jugo = juice but juego = game only you need "game/match" not "game/sport" = cada juego...(to be...older uses "tener") = cuando teníamos más años.

to op;ay = upon play ing = al jugar porque no jugaba muy bien. (I wasn't playing very well - sometimes you need to change the English so it flows better and not do it first in English, trying to translate word for word.)

Mis padres se sentían orgullosos (OR estaban) de mí (you need to learn prepositional pronouns = mí, ti, etc.) ...muchos visitantes y regalos (drop the word "the")

(I do not remember = is an English cue for the Present tense) = No recuerdo el día de su nacimiento. (weather uses hacer) = El tiempo hacía sol y calor.

en el noveno grado (in THE, etc.) (to Elkhorn or in Elkhorn) = en Elkhorn. El señor Brown...(talking ABOUT someone there is an "honorific" definite article for politeness) me enseñó (direct-object pronoun)

Yo no quería tener un accidente. No me sentía ni feliz ni asustada (I felt neither happy nor scared)...cuando subí en el auto. (climbed into)

Yo asistí a la preparatoria....la señora W.

trajo a Lily (personal "a" in front of a person, domestic pet) ....hasta que ella se durmió. (irregular Preterit of dormir = o--->u in the 3rd persons)

Ella era nuestra primera perra (female dog & possessive adjective = our) (the verb gustar does not work like most verbs. One thing IS pleasing or 2 or more things ARE pleasing. A Lily no le gustaba dormir en su jaula.

Hopefully you can correct everything. If you have time you might want to make all the corrections and then just post the Spanish. I'll try to recheck later.

Sra

Thank you so much for your time and help. Spanish is one of my harder subjects and this really was a lifesaver! Here are the corrections I have made.

Yo volé en un avión a ir al Mundo de Disney. Mi madre y los abuelos vinieron con yo.
Yo era muy pequeña y no sabía mucho. Yo estaba muy cansada y comí mucho.
Yo comencé el baloncesto en el quinto grado. Nosotros perdimos cada juego pero ganamos cuando teníamos más años.
Yo estaba muy emocionada al jugar pero no jugaba muy bien. Mis padres se sentían orgullosos de mí.
Mi hermana Tori nació en el hospital de Fort Atkinson. Ella tuvo muchos visitantes y regalos.
No recuerdo el día de su nacimiento. Mis padres decían mí el tiempo hacia sol y caliente.
Yo manejé por la primera vez en el noveno grado en Elkhorn. El Sr. Brown me enseñó en mis lecciones.
Yo no quería tener un accidente. No me sentía ni feliz ni asustada cuando subí en el auto.
Yo asistí a la preparatoria con mis amigos. Yo estudié en siete clases y un pasillo de estudio.
La tarea era muy difícil y estresante. Me gustaba mi maestra la Sra. Weitzel.
En la escuela intermedia, mi padre trajo a Lilly a mi escuela. Nosotros jugamos con ella hasta que ella se durmió.
Ella era nuestra primera perra. A Lilly no le gustaba dormir en su jaula.

Sure! I'd be happy to help you proofread your Spanish project. Here are some suggestions and edits for your sentences:

SPANISH

-Yo volé en el avión para ir a Disney World. Mi madre y mis abuelos vinieron conmigo.
-Yo era muy pequeña y no sabía mucho. Estaba muy cansada y comía mucho.
-Comencé a jugar al baloncesto en quinto grado. Perdíamos cada juego, pero ganamos cuando fuimos mayores.
-Estaba muy emocionada de jugar porque no era muy buena. Mis padres estaban orgullosos de mí.
-Mi hermana Tori nació en el hospital de Fort Atkinson. Tuvo muchos visitantes y regalos.
-No recuerdo el día de su nacimiento. Hacía sol y calor.
-Conduje por primera vez en noveno grado en Elkhorn. El Sr. Brown me enseñó en mis lecciones.
-No quería tener un accidente. No me sentía feliz ni asustada cuando conducía el coche.
-Asistí a la preparatoria con mis amigos. Estudié en siete clases y una sala de estudio.
-La tarea era muy difícil y estresante. Me gustaba mi maestra, la Sra. Weitzel.
-En la escuela intermedia, mi padre llevó a Lilly a mi escuela. Jugamos con ella hasta que se durmió.
-Ella fue nuestro primer perro. A Lilly no le gustaba dormir en su jaula.

ENGLISH

-I flew on an airplane to go to Disney World. My mother and my grandparents came with me.
-I was very young and didn't know much. I was very tired and ate a lot.
-I started playing basketball in fifth grade. We lost every game, but we won when we were older.
-I was very excited to play because I wasn't very good. My parents felt proud of me.
-My sister Tori was born at Fort Atkinson Hospital. She had many visitors and gifts.
-I don't remember the day of her birth. The weather was sunny and hot.
-I drove for the first time in ninth grade in Elkhorn. Mr. Brown taught me in my lessons.
-I didn't want to have an accident. I didn't feel happy or scared when I got in the car.
-I attended high school with my friends. I studied in seven classes and a study hall.
-The homework was very difficult and stressful. I liked my teacher, Mrs. Weitzel.
-In middle school, my dad brought Lilly to my school. We played with her until she fell asleep.
-She was our first dog. Lilly didn't like to sleep in her crate.

Overall, your sentences are well-written! Keep practicing and building your Spanish skills. Remember to double-check for grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. Good luck with your project!