Question

Helllo I writing a poem about my p.e.team,can you please read my work and say what you think about it.Thanks

I was delighted when I found out I was in Catherine Because Green was my favourite colour.

Answer 1

Is this your poem?

I was delighted when I found out I was in Catherine
Because Green was my favourite colour

To answer your question, I need to know if you are writing "free verse". Does your poem need to have a specific meter? Does it need to rhyme?