I forgot to include the following statements. Thank you very much!!
1)He fears that when Caesar will become (becomes) king he will turn into a dictator depriving the Romans of their liberty.
2)The ghost asks Hamlet to take revenge for his death (murder)
3)If something bad was committed, the whole system plunged into chaos but in the end the guilty culprit would be punished and order would be restored.
4)He uses his rethoric to persuade the crowd to mutiny against Brutus.
5)He transforms an act committed for freedom into a murderous crime.
6)Hamlet is represented as a torn person, because he doesn’t know whether to kill Claudius or (or to , to commit suicide)
7)Hamlet is very complex from a psychological point of view.
8)They thought the universe was ruled by God and linked to this (?) by a chain.
9)History was seen as made up of ripetitive events (?). It turned into a moral teacher, where the Elizabethans could find an ansie to their problems.
1. becomes
2. murder
3. You have 4 clauses here -- make them into 2 or 3 at most.
6. delete comma after "person" and omit wording in parentheses.
8. What is "this"?
9. Wordy -- Try this: History was perceived as a series of repetitive events, which became a teacher of morality so the Elizabethans could find solutions for their problems.