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1) Unfortunately, Elizabeth overheard his conversation but didn’t take it hard because of her playful manners.
2) Mr Bingley soon fell in love with her. When he was asked which daughters he thought the prettiest he answered it was Jane, the eldest Miss Bennet. Jane is surprised that he asked (?) her to dance twice
3) Elizabeth believes that Mr Bingley’s sisters are handsome and well educated but also proud and conceited.
4) She could not forgive Darcy, since he had mortified her pride at the ball. Later on, he will change his mind and says that her figure was light and pleasing.
5) One day a note came from Mr Bingley inviting Jane to Netherfield. Soon after she left, it began to rain and she got wet. When she arrived there, they called the doctor because she had caught a terrible cold. She spent the night there.