french

can someone please edit this for any spelling/grammar mistakes?
it's a skit on french expressions.




N: Bonjour, Cynthia.

C: Bonjour, Neal!

N: Comment-ça va?

C: Ça va bien, mais je suis très fatigué!

N: Oh? Pourqoui es-tu fatigué?

C: Parce-que j’ai eu cinq tests cette semaine et beaucoup de devoirs.

N: C’est dommage!

C: Oui, d’accord!

N: Je pense que tu dois faire le pont! Tu dois restes à la maison et ne viens pas à l’école pour la semaine prochaine!

C: Est-ce que plaisantes-tu avec moi?!

N: Non! Je suis sérieux! Tu as besoin de reposes!

C: Non, je ne fais pas ces choses! Cela va sans dire! Est-ce que mets-tu quelqu’un en boite?! Tu dois me savoir mieux que cela!

N: Relâcher! Ce n’est pas grave. Une semaine n’est rien! Tu ne manqueras pas une chose!

C: Tu es jetes de l’huile sur le feu, Neal! Si je manque un plus de classe, je serai expulsé!

N: Tu se inquiètes trop!

C: Non, n’est pas vrai. Je pense que tu ne inquiètes pas assez!

N: Avaler des couleuvres! L'école est une perte de votre temps! M'écouter et tu ne seras pas dans une rage!

C: Tu es fou! Tu ne comprends pas! *walks away*

N: *shrugs* J'ai essayé de la dire mais elle n'écoutera pas! *shakes head and walks away*

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asked by CL
  1. Comment-ça = no hyphen
    un test = intelligence test? There are tests and there are test. Take the word "test" in English, look up all the French possiblities and THEN take each French word and look up the primary English meaning!
    physical, moral, mental = une epreuve
    exam = un examen
    trial = un essai
    of intelligence = un test
    NOW choose the best choice, depending upon the context, or exactly how the word is used.

    I can't tell from C and N if either is feminine, and if so, watch all adjectives.

    Tu dois rester (infinitive or it's a run-on sentence)....et ne pas venir (negative infinitive)

    If you begin the question with "Est-ce que" the rest is straight word order = tu plaisantes......besoin de reposer. (the only form of a verb that can follow a preposition is an infinitive - memorize that!)

    Est-ce que tu mets...

    Sorry, but without the English of what you are trying to say, I don't know how to fix "Tu dois me savoir mieux...

    Reláche = affirmative command.

    Tu es jetes = definitely an error. Do you want present tense or past tense? Tu jetes... OR Tu as jeté..

    Si je manque plus...

    Tu t'inquiètes trop = Reflexive verb

    Non, ce n'est pas vrai.....tu n'inquiètes pas...

    Avaler = is the infinitive = to swallow. don't you require a command? Avale

    Decide before you begin if you want to use tu or vous and be consistent = une perte de ton temps! Listen to me? = Écoute-moi

    (He walks away? = Il s'en va à pied)
    (shrugs = il se hausse les épaules)

    Sra (aka Mme)

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