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Hey, I have to write a 200-250 word paper on my life in the future as a famous person. I am in a magazine, and i have to write about how my life, career, and family are. I would appreciate it if someone could proofread my Spanish. Thanks!

SPANISH: La revista de prensa rosa, In Touch, escribe un artículo sobre mi. En 2016, yo soy un director general de los Nueva York Yankees, el equipo de béisbol. Yo trabajo para George Steinbrenner, el jefe, y nosotros ganamos tres campeonatos. Yo firmé Derek Jeter, Bernie Williams y Jorge Posada como entrenadores. Mariano Rivera es el entrenador del cabeceo. Yo tengo una esposa bonita y dos niños. Los niños tienen uno y dos años. Mi trabajo es maravilloso, pero estoy hablar realmente ocupado a otros directores. Yo siempre tengo que utilizar mi teléfono celular para hablar a otros equipos acerca de comerciar a jugadores. También, yo siempre viajo con el equipo cuando los juegos están de viaje. En juegos, yo me siento en la cima del estadio con los otros líderes. Yo vivo en una mansión en Staten Island, Nueva York, el lugar donde nacía. Obtuve el trabajo cuando era veinte y tres años porque encontré George Steinbrenner en un restaurante. Yo especialicé en el negocio tan él me empleó como un interno. Después de un año como un interno, él me empleó como el director general para el equipo. Aunque esté ocupado, yo trabajo con varias caridades para ayudar a niños pobres. Yo planeo trabajar por veinte más años. Mi familia ha estado muy orgullosa y sostenedora de mis logros. Sin ellos, yo no tendría éxito.

ENGLISH: The tabloids in the magazine, In Touch, writes an article about me. In 2016, I am the general manager of the New York Yankees, the baseball team. I work for George Steinbrenner, the boss, and we won three championships. I signed Derek Jeter, Bernie Williams, and Jorge Posada as coaches. Mariano Rivera is the pitching coach. I have a beautiful wife and two children. The children are one and two years old. My job is wonderful, but i am really busy talking to other managers. I always have to use my cell phone to talk to other teams about trading players. Also, I am always traveling with the team when the games are out of town. At games, I sit in the top of the stadium with the other leaders. I live in a mansion in Staten Island, New York, the place where I was born. I got the job when I was 24 because I met George Steinbrenner in a restaurant. I specialized in business so he hired me as an intern. After a year as an intern, he hired me as the manager for the team. Although I am busy, I work with several charities to help poor children. I plan to work for twenty more years. My family have been very proud and supportive of my accomplishments. Without them, I would not be successful


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Posted by Mark on Tuesday, September 26, 2006 at 5:01pm.

Hey, I have to write a 200-250 word paper on my life in the future as a famous person. I am in a magazine, and i have to write about how my life, career, and family are. I would appreciate it if someone could proofread my Spanish. Thanks!

SPANISH: La revista de prensa rosa, In Touch, escribe un artículo sobre mi.(mí) En 2016, yo soy un(omit "un") director general de los (yanquis de) Nueva York Yankees,(delete "Yankees" here) el equipo de béisbol. Yo trabajo para George Steinbrenner, el jefe, y nosotros ganamos (or "acabamos de ganar" = have just won) tres campeonatos. Yo firmé ("a" personal) Derek Jeter, (a) Bernie Williams y (a) Jorge Posada como entrenadores. Mariano Rivera es el entrenador del cabeceo.(vocab = "pitching" as in basebal = de tirar la pelota) Yo tengo una esposa bonita y dos niños. Los niños tienen uno y dos años. Mi trabajo es maravilloso, pero estoy hablar(delete "hablar") realmente ocupado ("hablando") a otros directores. ("manageres" for sports) Yo siempre tengo que utilizar mi teléfono celular para hablar a otros equipos acerca de comerciar a jugadores. También, yo siempre viajo con el equipo cuando los juegos ("partidos") están ("lejos" + delete the rest) de viaje. En juegos,("Durante los partidos?) yo me siento en la cima("en lo alto") del estadio con los otros líderes. Yo vivo en una mansión en Staten Island, Nueva York, el lugar donde nacía.(pret vs. imp = nací) Obtuve(OR "Conseguí") el trabajo cuando era (delete "era" = "tenía") veinte y tres(new spelling = veintitrés) años porque encontré(a) George Steinbrenner en un restaurante. Yo especialicé en el negocio tan(delete "tan" + "y por eso") él me empleó como un interno. Después de un año como un(delete "un") interno, él me empleó como el director general para el equipo. Aunque esté ocupado, yo trabajo con varias caridades para ayudar a (los) niños pobres. Yo planeo trabajar por veinte más años.(word order = años más) Mi familia ha estado muy orgullosa y sostenedora ("sosteniente?") de mis logros.(prendas/talentos) Sin ellos, yo no tendría éxito.

ENGLISH: The tabloids in the magazine, In Touch, writes an article about me. In 2016, I am the general manager of the New York Yankees, the baseball team. I work for George Steinbrenner, the boss, and we won three championships. I signed Derek Jeter, Bernie Williams, and Jorge Posada as coaches. Mariano Rivera is the pitching coach. I have a beautiful wife and two children. The children are one and two years old. My job is wonderful, but i am really busy talking to other managers. I always have to use my cell phone to talk to other teams about trading players. Also, I am always traveling with the team when the games are out of town. At games, I sit in the top of the stadium with the other leaders. I live in a mansion in Staten Island, New York, the place where I was born. I got the job when I was 24 because I met George Steinbrenner in a restaurant. I specialized in business so he hired me as an intern. After a year as an intern, he hired me as the manager for the team. Although I am busy, I work with several charities to help poor children. I plan to work for twenty more years. My family have been very proud and supportive of my accomplishments. Without them, I would not be successful

NOTE: To use a dictionary well, first of all look up the English, write down ALL the possibilities in Spanish and now, most importantly, look up each Spanish word for the primary English meaning. You will often find surprises! Also, be sure to NOT write it out first in English because it will not "flow well" in Spanish, but rather write it in Spanish, trying to use words you already know and following standard word flow.


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I think you did a great job, let's try to revise some parts.
La revista de prensa rosa, En Contacto
Yo soy EL director general de los Yankees de Nueva York.
Yo CONTRATE -accent e- Mariano Rivera es el entrenador de CABECERA.
Mi trabajo es maravilloso pero MANTENGO REALMENTE OCUPADO HABLANDO CON otros directores.
celular para hablar CON otros equipos acerca de NEGOCIAR jugadores.
viajo con el equipo cuando los juegos son FUERA DE LA CIUDAD.
En LOS juegos,
NY, el lugar donde NACI -accent i-
el trabajo cuando TENIA -accent i- porque CONOCI -accent i- A George
Yo ME especialize -accent e- en NEGOCIOS, ASI QUE me empleo -accent o- como INTERINO
Aunque MANTENGO
muy orgullosa y HA APOYADO mis logros...


thank you so much for both of your help. i have finished it by fixing my paper with both of your corrections, and if you guys are free, I would appreciate it if you can double-check my revised work. Thanks!

SPANISH: La revista de prensa rosa, In Touch, escribe un artículo sobre mí. En 2016, yo soy el director general de los Yanquis de Nueva York, el equipo de béisbol. Yo trabajo para George Steinbrenner, el jefe, y nosotros ganamos tres campeonatos. Yo contraté a Derek Jeter, a Bernie Williams y a Jorge Posada como entrenadores. Mariano Rivera es el entrenador de cabecera. Yo tengo una esposa bonita y dos niños. Los niños tienen uno y dos años. Mi trabajo es maravilloso, pero mantengo realmente ocupado hablando con otros directores. Yo siempre tengo que utilizar mi teléfono celular para hablar con otros equipos acerca de negociar jugadores. También, yo siempre viajo con el equipo cuando los juegos fuera de la ciudad. Durante los juegos, yo me siento en en lo alto del estadio con los otros líderes. Yo vivo en una mansión en Staten Island, Nueva York, el lugar donde nací. Conseguí el trabajo cuando tenía veinte y tres años porque encontré a George Steinbrenner en un restaurante. Yo me especialicé en negocios asi que me empleó como interno. Después de un año como interno, él me empleó como el director general para el equipo. Aunque mantengo esté ocupado, yo trabajo con varias caridades para ayudar a los niños pobres. Yo planeo trabajar por veinte años más. Mi familia ha estado muy orgullosa y ha apoyado mis logros. Sin ellos, yo no tendría éxito.

ENGLISH: The tabloids in the magazine, In Touch, writes an article about me. In 2016, I am the general manager of the New York Yankees, the baseball team. I work for George Steinbrenner, the boss, and we won three championships. I signed Derek Jeter, Bernie Williams, and Jorge Posada as coaches. Mariano Rivera is the pitching coach. I have a beautiful wife and two children. The children are one and two years old. My job is wonderful, but i am really busy talking to other managers. I always have to use my cell phone to talk to other teams about trading players. Also, I am always traveling with the team when the games are out of town. At games, I sit in the top of the stadium with the other leaders. I live in a mansion in Staten Island, New York, the place where I was born. I got the job when I was 24 because I met George Steinbrenner in a restaurant. I specialized in business so he hired me as an intern. After a year as an intern, he hired me as the manager for the team. Although I am busy, I work with several charities to help poor children. I plan to work for twenty more years. My family have been very proud and supportive of my accomplishments. Without them, I would not be successful.

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