highschool english

Rewrite this paragraph, omitting the unnecessary words and replacing them with definite adjectives or nouns whenever possible.

Tuesday was really quite a lovely day. It was sort of a funny day. The weather was OK. We went to a very nice picnic. We had a good time. The food was terrific. We did various things and obviously had a nice time.

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  1. Get rid of
    lovely
    funny
    ok
    nice
    good
    terrific
    various things
    nice time

    We'll be glad to comment on YOUR answers.

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