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Hi there, could you see if the following points make sense, it's a biography on Vanessa Paradis.
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Vanessa Chantal Paradis est née le Décembre 22, 1972 à Saint-Maur-des-Fossés.

Elle a grandi avec une petite famille composée de ses parents, Corinne et André Paradis et sa soeur, Alysson.

À un âge très jeune, Vanessa suivre la vie de Marilyn Munroe et James Dean où le nom de son premier album, M & J a publié en 1988.

Peu de temps après s'être installé à Villiers-sur-Marne, les parents de Vanessa l'a inscrite dans les cours de danse, où sa carrière commençait.

À huit ans, Vanessa exécutée pour la première fois lors d'une émission de télévision intitulée L'école des fans où elle chante "Emilie Jolie et le Grand Oiseau".

Après l'aide de son oncle, Didier Pain, Vanessa a été choisi par les frères Forban à chanter leur chanson "La Magie des surprises parties". Cela a marqué son premier single publié par une maison de disques, mais il a été largement ignoré par le public.

Même si "" La Magie des surprises parties ». N'a pas réussi, Vanessa une persévérer et al enregistré le single« Joe le Taxi "qui a dépassé les # 1 en onze semaines pendentif France et ferait d'elle Une artiste de Renommée Internationale

En 1991, elle a promu un parfum pour Chanel, intitulé Coco et en 2004 elle a promu la ligne sac à main Chanel, Ligne Cambon et en 2008, elle a modelé pour Miu Miu

En 1994, Paradis filmé le film Élisa qui a été publié avec succès international. Ses films les plus récents sont Un monstre à Paris Avril et la crise de sage-femme.

Après de nombreux albums, elle sort un nouvel album Divinidylle en 2007 et a commencé une tournée de concerts

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  1. Y our date is incorrect = le 22 de décembre
    suivre, you must conjugate = suit
    installés if it refers to the parents or installée if it refers to her
    exécutée = this is a feminine singular adjective OR past participle but you need an auxiliary verb
    choisie = modify her
    une persévérer et al = did you mean she persevered? a perséveré et a...
    pendentif = without any English, I don't know what you are trying to say
    promouvu? promoted?
    elle sort = not Present tense, but passé composé

    Sra (aka Mme)

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