Can you check these sentences, please?
1)If you want to reduce this problem (a synonym for reduce?)
2)He thought that in a man there are good and evil parts (there is a good and an evil part)
3)You have to reuse them (instead of use them more times)
4)He said that he would that his children wouldn’t be judged (that he wished that his children.)
5)They campaigned against the laws of segregation (is against correct?)
6)She didn’t get up to leave her seat (is it correct?)
7)When there was a pull on the rope he had to decide what to do: hang on the rope and die or cut it and live
8)Paul uses the Internet to download answers: he sends the questions and they write the answers and with them he could pass his course.
9)Alternatives to animal testing are do experiments using human tissue
10)He couldn’t control his evil part and always did wrong actions
11)He decided to help his friend by lowering him on his rope
12)I use the Internet to research a lot of things for school
13)With the computer you can test drugs like on animals”. (You can test drugs using computer programmes instead of animals)
14)With the computer can simulate the test of drugs on the animal and this method is efficient and secure (The computer enables you to test drugs …..)
15)If I want to help, I mustn’t use plastic bags (is must correct?)
16)He had lost control of his transformations
17)She took the bus to go home. She sat down on an empty seat. A man asked her to stand up because he wanted to sit himself (is the position of himself correct?)
18)It is possible to use analysing statics and also human tissue can be used to test drugs (It is possible to analyse statistics or use human tissue to test drugs??)
19)He was asked to solve the mistery about the ring lost in his room (about the ring stolen from his room?)
20)He asked to leave her seat free for him (her seat to him?)
21)They wanted to have no segregation laws (They wanted to abolish segr….)
22)He said that he wanted to meet hate with love??
23)He had his leg broken (he had broken his leg)
24)The window of the car was smashed
25)I don’ use the Internet to cheat but for school research
26) He transformed himself without wanting it (is wanting correct)
27) He thought it had to be exciting to be sometimes evil
28) Can you use sitting place instead of bus seat?
29) Scientits can create a reproduction of the human tissue and test products on it????
30) He uses the Internet for doing his researches but he copies what he finds word for word
Thanks for the help
Will you please answer my question on your LAST post? What exactly is this assignment?
Just as before, it's much too long for my eyes to keep looking up and down, so I'm printing it first.
Sra
1. some synonyms of reduce: decrease, diminish, lessen, minify, cut down
2. there is = singular but there are = plural (there are parts) (there is a part)
3. ok
4. either
5. yes
6. yes
7. hang onto the rope
8. a bit long. You could omit the first "and"
9. are to do / or are doing
10. ok
11. ok
12. ok
13. use what is in the parentheses
14. parentheses
15. yes
16. ok
17. wanted to seat himself is better
18. statics = statistics? = parentheses
20. as is
21. either
22. ok
24. either
24. ok
25. don' is missing the final detter = don't
26. o k
27. ok
28 = awkward
29. Scientists?
30. ok
Sorry, I was inerrupted.
Sra
Sure! Here are the corrected sentences:
1) If you want to alleviate this problem (a synonym for reduce)
2) He thought that in a man there is a good and an evil part
3) You have to reuse them (instead of using them more times)
4) He said that he wished that his children wouldn't be judged
5) They campaigned against the laws of segregation (against is correct)
6) She didn't get up to leave her seat (it is correct)
7) When there was a pull on the rope, he had to decide what to do: hang on the rope and die or cut it and live
8) Paul uses the internet to download answers: he sends the questions and they write the answers, and with them, he could pass his course.
9) Alternatives to animal testing include conducting experiments using human tissue
10) He couldn't control his evil side and always did wrong actions
11) He decided to help his friend by lowering him with his rope
12) I use the internet to research a lot of things for school
13) With the computer, you can test drugs using computer programs instead of animals
14) The computer enables you to simulate drug tests on animals, and this method is efficient and secure
15) If I want to help, I shouldn't use plastic bags (must is correct, but shouldn't is more appropriate)
16) He had lost control of his transformations
17) She took the bus to go home. She sat down on an empty seat. A man asked her to stand up because he wanted to sit there (the position of himself is not necessary)
18) It is possible to analyze statistics or use human tissue to test drugs
19) He was asked to solve the mystery of the ring stolen from his room
20) He asked her to leave her seat free for him (or he asked her if she could let him have her seat)
21) They wanted to abolish segregation laws
22) He said that he wanted to respond to hate with love
23) He broke his leg (he had broken his leg is also correct)
24) The car window was smashed
25) I don't use the internet to cheat, but for school research
26) He transformed himself without wanting to
27) He thought it must be exciting to be sometimes evil
28) Can you use the phrase "sitting place" instead of "bus seat"?
29) Scientists can create a replica of human tissue and test products on it
30) He uses the internet for his research but he copies what he finds word for word
I hope this helps! Let me know if you have any other questions.