1)A considerate person is someone that (or only who is possible) always thinks of others
2)In Montgomery , Alabama, black people were not allowed to do a lot of things, for example go to restaurants, sit in the front of buses (is for example correct: can I use such as to go to restaurants??)
3)He didn’t want a law that fight black people (a law segregating black people???)
4)He was sent to earth from the planet Krypton (is from correct?)
5)The clock fell on the roof of the car (but also landed on the roof?)
6)It jumped onto the CD player (is “on” possible?)
7)Animal testing isn’t a necessary evil since the result on an animal (better the response of an animal?) can be different from the result on people (or on a human/humans?)
8)I use the Internet for school research but I don’t cheat all the words but I change the words of the test with my words (How can this sentence be improved? I don’t copy the content words for words but I try to express myself in my own words)
9)They introduced a ten-pence tax per plastic bag and their use was reduced by (or cut down?) by 90% (Can you also say “fell” by..)
10)He involuntarily transformed into Hyde (is the position of the adverb correct?)
11)In the Atacama desert and not in the desert of Atacama
12)He couldn’t see his visitor but only a bandage hanging on air and covered in blood, but empty (or an empty bandage hanging in the air )
13)She refused to stand up from her seat (is from correct? Could you say get up from?)
14)A white man wanted her seat because the others were full (is it OK)
15)to fight for equality and civil rights for blacks (is “for” correct?)
16)Equality and love between white and black Americans was (and not “were”??) king’s key-message in his speech
17)There was a strong pull on the rope (is on correct). It was Joe, who was pulling him off the mountain (pull off correct?). He wasn’t strong enough to hold his friend (hold?) and decided to cut the rope.
18)He arrived at the camp after four days without food and water (or without any food or water)
19)They send him the answers and he hands them in to his teacher (is hand in correct?)
20)The clock smashed through the window, fell down on the roof of the car (or fell onto the roof…)
21)You can use biodegradable bags that after the use you can put in the ground and after 18 months they’ll not be again??? (that if put in the ground they can disappear after …..??)
22)to separate the good from the evil (better the good and the evil sides of his personality??)
23)He liked transforming (and not to transform) himself into Mr Hyde because he hadn’t control of himself (because he had no control on himself?)
24)His evil had killed … (his evil side?)
25)He lost his control (control of his double personality??)
26)She was seating on a bus (correct: she was sitting on a bus)
27)Her answer was “no”. (instead of she she refused to…)
28)The movement was founded (is set up also correct? What are other synonyms)
29)he decided to combat the evil (is combat correct?)
30)he arrived at the camp by himself by moving (or by crawling acroos the ice)
31)how could you correct the following sentence? Even God in the Genesis told that the human race would command the animal (said that the human race would command the animal one??)
32)technology of our day (Current or present technology) can be used instead of animal testing to test beauty products
Thanks a lot.
First of all, would you please explain the assignment? Are both the sentence as is and what you include in parentheses all your work? Why are there 2 choices for the sentences? My eyes will not scan up and down so I have to print the sentences so I can read them.
I 'll be back as soon as they are printed (4 pages).
Sra
1. either is grammatically correct, but because it's a person, I prefer "who."
2. (to go) but the rest is fine.
3. (in parenetheses) other wise a law that fights
4. 6es
5. either
6. yes
7. on and either, but I like what is in parentheses
8. I don't copy the words
9. any of those 3
10. yes, often the adverb can go in several places: at the beginning as well
11. ok
12. hanging in the air - what is in parenthese
13. either
14. ok
15. yes
16. was and capitalize King's
17. yes - all 3 ok
18. either
19. yes
20. either
21. use what is in parentheses
22. either
23. the first is either and the past - no control over himself
24. in parentheses is clearer
25. either
26. she was sitting or she was seated
27. either
28. founded / established / formed
29. yes
30. moving or crawling across
31. in Genesis or in the book of Genesis - as is
32. what is in parentheses is more common
Sra
1) Yes, "someone that" or "someone who" is correct. You can also use "someone who always thinks of others" as a complete sentence.
To answer this question, you can think about what it means to be considerate and how it relates to always thinking of others. Considerate people tend to show kindness and empathy towards others, and they put others' needs and feelings before their own. They are mindful of how their actions may impact those around them and strive to make others feel valued and respected.
2) Yes, you can use "such as" in this context. It is correct to say "For example, go to restaurants."
3) Yes, "a law segregating black people" is a correct alternative. By using the word "segregating," it clearly indicates that the law is separating black people from others.
4) Yes, "from" is correct in this context. It indicates that the person was sent to earth starting their journey on the planet Krypton.
5) Both "fell on the roof of the car" and "landed on the roof" are correct. They convey the same meaning, but "fell on the roof of the car" sounds more natural.
6) Yes, "on" is possible in this context. It indicates that the action of jumping occurred onto the CD player.
7) Yes, "response of an animal" is better than "the result of an animal." Regarding the second part, you can say "the result on people" or "the result on a human/humans" - both are correct.
8) To improve this sentence, you can say: "I use the Internet for school research, but instead of copying the content word-for-word, I rephrase the information in my own words to express myself."
9) Both "reduced by" and "cut down by" are correct. "Fell" is not appropriate in this context because it doesn't accurately describe the decrease.
10) Yes, the position of the adverb is correct in this sentence.
11) In this case, it is correct to say "In the Atacama Desert" instead of "the desert of Atacama."
12) Both "empty" and "an empty bandage hanging in the air" are correct. They convey the same meaning.
13) Both "get up from" and "stand up from" are correct. You can use either based on personal preference.
14) Yes, "A white man wanted her seat because the others were full" is correct. It effectively conveys the situation.
15) Yes, "for" is correct in this context. It shows that the fight is aimed at achieving equality and civil rights specifically for black people.
16) It is correct to say "Equality and love between white and black Americans were king's key messages in his speech." The subject is plural, so "were" is appropriate.
17) Both "on" and "pull off" are correct in this context. "Hold" is also correct, as it describes the act of sustaining someone's weight or preventing them from falling.
18) Both "without food and water" and "without any food or water" are correct. They convey the same meaning.
19) Yes, "hand in" is correct in this context. It means submitting or delivering the answers.
20) Both "fell down on the roof of the car" and "fell onto the roof" are correct. They convey the same meaning.
21) To improve this sentence, you can say: "You can use biodegradable bags that, when placed in the ground, will decompose within 18 months."
22) Both "to separate the good from the evil" and "the good and the evil sides of his personality" are correct, but the latter provides more clarity.
23) It is correct to say "He liked transforming himself into Mr. Hyde because he had no control of himself."
24) Both "his evil" and "his evil side" are correct. They convey the same meaning.
25) Yes, "control of his double personality" is correct.
26) Yes, "She was sitting on a bus" is correct.
27) Yes, instead of saying "Her answer was 'no,'" you can say "She refused."
28) Yes, "set up" is a correct synonym for "founded." Other synonyms could include "established," "created," or "formed."
29) Yes, "combat" is correct in this context. It means to fight against or oppose something.
30) To improve this sentence, you can say: "He arrived at the camp by himself, moving or crawling across the ice."
31) To correct the sentence, you can say: "Even in the book of Genesis, God said that the human race would have dominion over the animals."
32) Yes, "current" or "present" technology can be used instead of animal testing to test beauty products.
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