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Journal Entry: What I did to Jack should be unforgivable. Today I might have ruined Jack’s entire high school life. Part way through period one class, I asked to go use the washroom. I went to the south west washroom, I tried opening the first bathroom stall but it was occupied, I moved down the row of stalls each rejecting my entry. I was now at the last one, the door of stall accepted me but not Jack, he was sitting on the toilet seat, his face filled with shock, holding his Nintendo DS on his right hand and Nintendo DS Stylus on his left hand. With my teenager reflex I grabbed my phone and took a picture of this horrific sight. I quickly closed the door and ran back to class leaving Jack calling my name to get me to come back and my bladder stilled filled. After period one was over, Jack came up to me in the hallway and begged me not to show any one the picture I took of him, I told him I would not tell anyone, just to get him to go away. Five minutes before period two, I showed my friends the picture, it made them laugh so hard that some of them got kicked out of class for being to loud. Throughout the rest of the day, every time my friends saw Jack, they would pull down their pants leaving their boxers visible and start calling him Nintendo boy. But calling him Nintendo boy was nothing compared to them posting the picture all over the school hallways the next day. My friends stole my cell phone from my backpack during period two and went to a computer lab to print the picture. After seeing Jack’s saddened face on the bus, I felt angry, guilty and stupid for showing and even taking the picture. Even right know I wish I could take everything back, I made a big mistake, a mistake like Macbeth regretting killing king Banquo. But this is a mistake that is unforgivable.
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Journal Entry: I deeply regret my actions towards Jack. Today, I did something that may have profoundly affected Jack's high school experience. During period one, I asked to use the restroom and headed to the southwest washroom. Unfortunately, all the stalls were occupied except for the last one. As I opened the door, I was taken aback to find Jack sitting on the toilet, engrossed in his Nintendo DS. Without thinking, I impulsively snapped a photo of this unexpected sight. Panicked, I closed the door and hurried back to class, leaving Jack calling out my name and my bladder still urging me to use the restroom.
After the class ended, Jack approached me in the hallway and pleaded with me not to show anyone the picture I had taken. In order to brush him off, I lied and said I wouldn't show it to anyone. Five minutes before period two, I succumbed to peer pressure and showed the picture to my friends. Their laughter became so disruptive that some of them were even reprimanded by the teacher. Throughout the day, my friends greeted Jack by pulling down their pants to reveal their boxers, mocking him as "Nintendo boy." However, these actions were nothing compared to what followed the next day when they decided to post the picture all over the school hallways.
To my dismay, my friends took my cell phone from my backpack during period two and used a computer lab to print copies of the photo. Witnessing the sadness on Jack's face during our bus ride home, I felt overwhelmed by a mixture of anger, guilt, and stupidity for both taking and showing the picture. Even now, I desperately wish I could undo everything. I fully recognize the gravity of my mistake, and it is a mistake that I consider to be unforgivable.
It's important to acknowledge the negative consequences of your actions and reflect on the impact it had on those involved. Remember to consider how your actions may affect others before making impulsive decisions in the future.