Literature

Does this sentence make sense?

My backyard is a haven of peace.
Or, My backyard is a haven of peace for me.

Which one should I use for my observational essay?

Thanks
-MC

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  1. I would use "seems" as opposed to "is". Other than that, the sentence is great.

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  2. So..my backyard seems as a haven of peace to me?

    -MC

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  3. My backyard seems a peaceful haven to me. <G>

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