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Topic: What is your biggest regret in life?

My Biggest Regret

Everyone has had some regrets about something in life. Some of the regrets could have been about a relationship or another choice that he or she made. Sometimes we make decisions base on how we are feeling at the moment, and don't really take time to think about it. My biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have.


To begin with, people often just make decisions about things in their life, but they soon realized that they should not have made it. By them making that decision in their life; it caused them to have sleepless nights,and pain. One thing that many people have regret about is meeting the person whom they fell in love with.Because they might be violent, or get them held down with children and that mean they have to deal with each other for 18 years.

Next, my biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have taken it. I would do my work and turn it in, but I wouldn't put a lot of effort into it. For instance, I remember one time I had to turn in some math problems. The teacher assigned us about fifty problems in our math book. I did all the problems, but I had my cousin to do the one's that I didn't understand. Although she did the problems; I should have let her explained the problems so that I would know how to work them out the next time. I also regret cheating myself because I realized that if I had put forth more effort then I probably wouldn't have as many problems in my life today.


In conclusion, we all have asked ourselves, "What was I thinking about?" Often the decisions we make can really hurt us farther down the road in our lives. My biggest regret is not taking advantage of high school as I should have. When I think of some of the things I did when I was younger, I truly wonder what I was thinking about, but these things must have happened so that I could learn from my mistakes and not repeat them.

Everyone has had regrets about something in life. The regrets could have been about a relationship or another choice that he or she made. Sometimes we make decisions based on how we are feeling at the moment, and we do not really take the time to think about it. My biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have.

People often make decisions about their life that they soon realized they should not have made. By them making those decisions in their lives; it caused them to have sleepless nights and pain. Many people have regrets about meeting the person whom they fell in love with because they might be violent or get them held down with children. That could mean they have to deal with each other for 18 years.

My personal biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have. I would do my work and turn it in, but I would not put a lot of effort into it. For instance, I remember one time I had to turn in some math problems. The teacher assigned us fifty problems in our math book. I did all the problems, but I had my cousin do the questions I did not understand. Although she did the problems, I should have let her explain the problems so I would have known how to work them out on the test. I also regret cheating myself because I realize that if I had put forth more effort, then I probably would not have as many problems in my life today.

In conclusion, we all have asked ourselves, "What was I thinking about?" Often the decisions we make can hurt us farther down the road in our lives. My biggest regret is not taking advantage of high school as I should have. When I think of some of the things I did when I was younger, I truly wonder what I was thinking about, but these things must have happened so that I could learn from my mistakes and not repeat them.

You still need to turn the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs around. They don't make good sense in their current order.

I still don't believe there's enough "you" in the paper.

Help:Please change show me anthing that I need to do, by placing the correct form at the it the bottom of the essay.

Topic: What is your biggest regret in life?

My Biggest Regret
Everyone has had regrets about something in life. The regrets could have been about a relationship or another choice that he or she made. Sometimes we make decisions based on how we are feeling at the moment, and we do not really take the time to think about it. My biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have.

To begin with, I have regreted a lot of things that has happen in my life. Some of the things that happened I feel that I could have prevented if I only had taken time to think about the decision I made. I remember one time I was supposed to have went straight to my aunt house and back home, but instead I went over my friend house. As I was leaving, I had a blow out on my car. I had to eventually call my parents and tell them what had happened. I felt bad about the incident because I did not tell them exactly what I had planned to do.

Next,my biggest regret is not taking high school as seriously as I should have. I would do my work and turn it in, but I would not put a lot of effort into it. For instance, I remember one time I had to turn in some math problems. The teacher assigned us fifty problems in our math book. I did all the problems, but I had my cousin do the questions I did not understand. Although she did the problems, I should have let her explain the problems so I would have known how to work them out on the test. I also regret cheating myself because I realize that if I had put forth more effort, then I probably would not have as many problems in my life today.

In conclusion, we all have asked ourselves, "What was I thinking about?" Often the decisions we make can hurt us farther down the road in our lives. My biggest regret is not taking advantage of high school as I should have. When I think of some of the things I did when I was younger, I truly wonder what I was thinking about, but these things must have happened so that I could learn from my mistakes and not repeat them.

To correct the placement of the correct form at the bottom of the essay, you would need to rephrase the last sentence of the essay. Instead of "but these things must have happened so that I could learn from my mistakes and not repeat them," you could say "but these things happened as learning experiences to help me avoid repeating them in the future."

The corrected conclusion would then read:

"In conclusion, we all have asked ourselves, 'What was I thinking about?' Often the decisions we make can really hurt us farther down the road in our lives. My biggest regret is not taking advantage of high school as I should have. When I think of some of the things I did when I was younger, I truly wonder what I was thinking about, but these things happened as learning experiences to help me avoid repeating them in the future."