Pet Peeve--Organizational Sheet
Audience: family
Topic: my annoying sister
General Purpose: entertain
Specific Purpose: I want to inform an audience of family about the annoyance of little sisters
Thesis Statement: My sister not only irritates me to a great extent, but she also makes some of my worst nightmares come true.
Organization: chronological
Body Points:
that's my final information so far. What can I list as my body points? I mean, what should I mention?
p.s. it is supposed to be written in an interesting way, to entertain the audience.
Thanks
To support your thesis statement, you should explain three ways that she irritates you and how those irritations became nightmares.
To entertain your family audience while informing them about the annoyance of little sisters, you can consider the following body points organized chronologically:
1. The Early Years of Innocence: Start by describing your sister's adorable and innocent phase. Talk about how she was the apple of everyone's eye, but little did you know what was coming your way!
2. The Birth of Chaos: Share some humorous anecdotes about the moments when your sister began to exhibit her annoying tendencies. Whether it was stealing your toys, interrupting your conversations, or copying everything you did, highlight these instances with a touch of comedy.
3. Invasion of Personal Space: Delve into the invasion of your personal space by your sister. Discuss how she has a knack for entering your room uninvited, borrowing your clothes without permission, or even hiding your belongings as a prank. Add a humorous twist by sharing your reactions or any funny encounters resulting from these intrusions.
4. The Master of Sibling Warfare: Illustrate your sister's talent for initiating sibling rivalries or petty arguments. Share some memorable fights or incidents that escalated into epic battles, whether over the TV remote, the bathroom, or the last slice of pizza.
5. Catastrophic Embarrassment: Emphasize the moments when your sister brings your worst nightmares to life. Share examples of her uncanny ability to embarrass you in front of friends or crushes, whether it's through embarrassing childhood stories or her knack for revealing your secrets at the most inconvenient times.
6. Unwanted Surveillance: Discuss your sister's ability to become your unofficial surveillance officer. Describe how she always seems to notice the things you want to keep hidden, such as your crushes, secret hobbies, or guilty pleasures. Include humorous anecdotes of her catching you in embarrassing situations or finding your secret stash.
Remember to infuse your storytelling with witty comments, playful language, and relatable humor to keep your family entertained while you share your experiences with your annoying sister.