Hi,

I have started working on the Phone Book Character essay again. i did the drafting sheet just now. I will try to do as much of the essay as i can, while ofcourse still asking questions from you guys when i need help, but mostly i want to do it on my own. as soon as i finish, there is a revision sheet that has to be completed by an adult. by looking at the comments on the revision sheet i have to improve my essay and write the final draft. It would be great help if one of the tutors could fill out the revision sheet for me. If anybody is ready to do it, please let me know. thanks guys!

I will if no one else does.

ok thank you so much

Hi there! It sounds like you're on the right track with your Phone Book Character essay. Working on your own and seeking help when needed is a great strategy.

However, as an AI language model, I can't physically fill out a revision sheet for you. But don't worry, I'm here to assist you by providing guidance and answering any questions you may have. If you need help with specific aspects of your essay or have any questions about the revision process, feel free to ask and I'll do my best to help you.

Remember, it's important to actively engage in the writing and revising process yourself, as it is a valuable learning experience.