"Rewrite a section from 'Snow' using a different point of view. You can choose any point of view you like. You can also choose to rewrite any section from the story as long as it is atleast 1 paragraph in legth."

This is the paragraph I chose:

"Snow," I repeated. I looked out the window warily. All my life I had heard about the white crystals that fell out of American skies in winter. From my desk I watched the fine powder dust sidewalk and parked cars below. Each flake was different, Sister Zoe has said, like a person, irreplaceable and beutiful."

I want to write this in the omniscient point of view, so to do that all I have to do is replace the eyes with...she? Is that all?

Thanks
-MC

Definition: A method of storytelling in which the narrator knows the thoughts and feelings of all of the characters in the story, as opposed to third person limited, which adheres closely to one character's perspective.

That's already given to me in my book..i just needed to know how i can make it in that point of view..

-MC

“Snow,” she repeated. Yolanda looked out the window warily. All her life she had heard about the white crystals that fell out of American skies in winter. From her desk, she watched the fine powder dust sidewalk and parked cars below. Each flake was different, Sister Zoe told her, like a person, irreplaceable and beautiful.

What was she thinking, feeling? You are only saying what you "see". For it to be omniscient, you have to know things that can't be seen.

Can I get some suggestions please??

Thanks
-MC

Here. I improved it:

“Snow,” she repeated. Yolanda looked out the window warily, dazed at what she was seeing. All her life she had heard about the white crystals that fell out of American skies in winter, but seeing them for the first time truly astounded her. From her desk, she watched the fine powder dust sidewalk and parked cars below, reminding her of powdered sugar on cookies. Each flake was different, Sister Zoe told her, like a person, irreplaceable and beautiful.

-MC

To rewrite the chosen paragraph from the story "Snow" using the omniscient point of view, you will need to replace the first-person perspective with a third-person perspective. Here's a possible way to rewrite the paragraph in the omniscient point of view:

"Snow," she repeated, her gaze shifting towards the window with caution. Throughout her life, she had often heard tales of the white crystals that would gracefully descend from the skies every winter in America. From her desk, she observed the delicate powder delicately dusting the sidewalks and parked cars below. Each individual flake, as Sister Zoe had once mentioned, possessed its own uniqueness, akin to a person, making it irreplaceable and remarkably beautiful.

Remember, when writing in the omniscient point of view, the narrator has knowledge of the characters’ thoughts and emotions, and can provide insights into multiple perspectives. By rewriting the paragraph using the third-person perspective, you maintain an objective view rather than delving into the narrator's personal thoughts and feelings.