I have to do a resume for school and well is it good do i need more info or what? what are your suggestions?
Hope ask
233 Crimson Avenue
Regina, SK S7H 8K9
(306) 987 - 1234
September 20, 2006
Mrs. Julie Amerigon
Human Resources Director
37 Corporate Place
Regina, SK S3K 9K8
Dear: Mrs. Julie Amerigon,
I am writing to you because I am interested in the job opportunity as working as a cashier at the shoe company. I have been to your store numerous times and I enjoy the team work. I can see myself being part of that team. Working as a cashier is something I take pride in.
I have over a year of experience as a cashier. Not only can I speak English but German as well. I am organized, reliable, and am ready to learn anything new that comes my way.
I can be reached at (306) 987 - 1234; I look forward to meeting you. Enclosed is my resume. Thank you for your time and consideration. I know I could do an excellent job for you.
Sincerely,
Hope ask
P.S I this is not really my info!
Hope ask
233 Crimson Avenue
Regina, SK S7H 8K9
(306) 987 - 1234
September 20, 2006
Mrs. Julie Amerigon
Human Resources Director
37 Corporate Place
Regina, SK S3K 9K8
Dear: Mrs. Julie Amerigon,
I am writing to you because I am interested in the position of cashier at the shoe company. I have been to your store numerous times<~~insert comma and I enjoy the teamwork. I can see myself being part of that team. Working as a cashier is something I wouldtake pride in.
I have over a year of experience as a cashier. Not only can I speak English but German as well. I am organized, reliable, and am<~~delete "am" ready to learn anything new that comes my way.
I can be reached at (306) 987 - 1234; I look forward to meeting you. Enclosed is my resume. Thank you for your time and consideration. I know I could do an excellent job for you.
Sincerely,
Hope ask
Sounds good to me -- with those few corrections.
Here is a good website that can help with any other resume or cover letter questions:
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/pw/index.html
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thanks!
what question?
After reviewing your resume, it looks pretty good overall. However, there are a few suggestions I have for you:
1. Include your full name: Make sure to include your full name at the beginning of your resume so that the employer knows who you are right away.
2. Add a clear objective: It would be helpful to have a clear objective statement at the beginning of your resume to let the employer know what position you are applying for and why you are interested in it.
3. Provide more details about your experience: While you mention that you have over a year of experience as a cashier, it would be beneficial to provide more specific details about your responsibilities and accomplishments in that role. This will give the employer a better idea of your skills and abilities as a cashier.
4. Proofread for grammatical errors: Double-check your resume for any grammatical errors or typos. This will ensure that your resume looks professional and polished.
For further guidance on writing a resume, I would recommend visiting the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL) website. They have a section specifically dedicated to resume writing, which can provide you with more in-depth information and tips.
I hope these suggestions help! Good luck with your resume.