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I posted this yesterday, but I don't think any one noticed.

Imagine you are a delegate to the Estates General. Explain why YOU, as a representative of one of the Estates, will ot will not cooperate with the king. P.S the king I'm talking about is Louis XVI.

I am going to imagine that I am a peasant, one of the lower classes.

--- As a representative, I will not cooperate with the king because he does not make decisions that apply good for everyone. He doesn't try to understand the poor's problems at all. It is always us who have to pay our taxes twice as much as the higher class. Because of him others have died of starvation. The king does not care
for anyone other than himself. If he really did care then instead of spending his money abundantly, he would donate it to us, the poor.

please add more, I would like just a few more sentences, thanks. Also if some sentences in my Paragraph do not make sense, then please change them around.

Your paragraph looks good.

Go back to your textbook and you may find more details to add.

As a representative, I will not cooperate with the king because he does not make decisions that apply good for everyone. He doesn't try to understand the poor's problems at all. From our perspective the king can never become god. As days pass, our loyalty for him decreases. How can someone like him be given the power to rule? It is the mighty who shall rule. If the king was fair then he wouldn't have picked on us to pay our taxes twice as much as the higher class. Because of him others have died of starvation. The king does not care

for anyone other than himself. If he really did care then instead of spending his money abundantly, he would donate it to us, the poor. What do we have? Nothing is the answer, our only hope was the king, but now that is pointless as well. Us peasants can only pray to the almighty for everyones good. Also, no one can change the fact that whatever destiny has instore for you will happen; soon we may be in the king's position, and the king may be in ours.

I have added more, but some sentences in this paragraph are kind of messed up, so if you can change them, I would be really thankful, thanks.

Aside from a couple of grammatical mistakes that would be understandable in a poor, illiterate peasant, your paragraph is very good.

thank you

You're welcome.

As a representative of the lower classes, I will not cooperate with King Louis XVI because he fails to address the injustices and inequalities that plague our society. His lavish lifestyle and indifference towards the plight of the poor reflect a complete disregard for our well-being. The burden of excessive taxation falls disproportionately on our shoulders, while the wealthy escape their fair share of contribution. The king's failure to acknowledge and understand the struggles faced by the impoverished have resulted in widespread starvation and suffering. If the king genuinely cared for his subjects, he would allocate his resources towards alleviating the hardships of the lower classes rather than indulging in personal luxuries. Cooperation with a monarch who prioritizes his own interests over the welfare of the people would only perpetuate our inequality and suffering.