George Orwell was the Modernist mand that reveals how his life was in his works of Down and Out in Paris and London.
Is this a good thesis for my paper? or please help me change it to be good
I don't see how "modernist" describes Orwell's account of his poverty in Down and Out in Paris and London. You may want to write about his socialist leanings that are based on these experiences.
This site may give you more ideas.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Down_and_Out_in_Paris_and_London
Please post another thesis, and we'll try to help you.
George Orwell was the ideal Modernist gentlemen that reveals how his harsh livings in, Down and Out in Paris and London.
This would be a better thesis statement:
George Orwell was a modernist author who revealed his impoverished life in Down and Out in Paris and London.
During the late 1800's, living in Europe was a very harsh for George Orwell, he reveals his experience in "Down and Out in Paris and London"
okay how about this thesis?
George Orwell was born in 1903 and published Down and Out in Paris and London in 1933. He did not live in the 1800s.
How about?
Living in Europe was very harsh for George Orwell as he reveals in Down and Out in Paris and London.
so could i say
During the early 1900's, living in Europe was very harsh for George Orwell, he reveals his thoughts in the book he published "Down and Out in Paris and London.;
That's good, but you have a run-on sentence. You can correct it this way:
During the early 1900s, living in Europe was very harsh for George Orwell, as he reveals in his book Down and Out in Paris and London.
That sounds better! Just be sure to revise the punctuation and format of your thesis statement. Here is a revised version:
During the early 1900s, living in Europe was very harsh for George Orwell, as he reveals in his book Down and Out in Paris and London.