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Is this thesis OK for my schizophrenia essay?

Schizophrenia is a severe mental illness that deeply affects the patient's daily life

Thanks
-MC

That's a factual statement, not a thesis statement. You should not delete anything; all you need to do is add your own position or stance or opinion and maybe do a little rephrasing.

Here are examples of thesis statements to help you:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

I read the first one which tells the difference between a factual and thesis statement but I'm having a little writers block :P

Any suggestions on how I can rephrase this or what I need to add? I don't have an opinion on this topic...
-MC

If you don't have an opinion, what are you going to write? Just a report?

If you're supposed to be writing an essay (or research paper), you need to have a topic about which you have an opinion; otherwise, you cannot take and defend your position.

If you're still stuck about the topic, try this:

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Steps 1 and 2 seem to be what you need help with now.

Alright, thanks

-MC

schizophrenia

this is to much to read u suck but thanks for wasting my time

You don't defend your position in a ressearch paper. You simply explain what you learned...the facts, no opinions.

Yes, your thesis statement is clear and concise. It effectively communicates the main idea of your essay, which is to explore and discuss schizophrenia as a severe mental illness and its impact on the daily life of those affected by it. However, it is important to note that a thesis statement is usually more effective when it is arguable. To make it arguable, you might consider adding specific aspects or factors that you will address in your essay, such as the symptoms, risk factors, treatment options, or impact on relationships or employment.