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Please critique my Introduction paragraph for my essay I changed the last sentence to make a better arguement................-In the 1981 Supreme Court Case of Rostker vs. Goldberg the debate was weather women should be included in any future draft registration. In the end the Court ruled that women did not have to be included in the draft registration. I do not agree with the outcome because I believe that men and women are equal. Therefore, if men are required at 18 to register for the draft then women should also be required to do the same.

In the 1981 Supreme Court Case of Rostker vs. Goldberg<~~add comma the debate was weather<~~needs to be whether women should be included in any future draft registration. In the end<~~add comma the Court ruled that women did not have to be included in the draft registration. I do not agree with the outcome because I believe that men and women are equal. Therefore, if men are required at 18 to register for the draft<~~add comma then women should also be required to do the same.

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