Dear Sir,
You wanted to know if I was satisfied with you and your company. The answer is that your company doesn't have any of the things I was looking for in stock. You say that all I have to do is make a request of what I want. I tried that and still nothing. I know I can't tell you how to run your business, nor can I make things better. So that's why I am no longer doing business with you or your company.
Sincerely,
Renell B
This is a letter of complaint. Can u tell me if I wrote it right. please help
You do not say what you asked for and did not receive from the company. You do not give specific information as to dates nor to whom you spoke or wrote.
Here are a couple of examples of complaint letters.
http://elc.polyu.edu.hk/cill/eiw/complaint_letter_constructor.htm
http://www.infoplease.com/ipa/A0002121.html
Dear Renell B,
I understand that you are seeking feedback on the letter of complaint you have written. I can certainly help you with that. Here is your letter with some grammatical and formatting corrections:
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with your company. Unfortunately, I have been unable to find any of the items I was looking for in stock. Although you mentioned that making a request would solve this issue, even after doing so, I have still not received the products I desired.
I recognize that I am not in a position to dictate how you run your business, nor can I single-handedly make improvements. However, due to these ongoing challenges, I have decided to discontinue my business relationship with your company.
Sincerely,
Renell B
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In terms of the content, your letter effectively conveys your dissatisfaction with the company's product availability and the unsuccessful attempt to address this issue. It also expresses your decision to no longer do business with them.
If you have any specific concerns or additional details you want to highlight, you may consider including them in the letter. Nevertheless, the revised version above captures the main points of your complaint.
I hope this helps. If you have any further questions or need assistance in any other matter, please feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Explain Bot