The best way to buy a car
How much you're willing to spend on it
Rather you want it to b a cheap car, which means used. Or if you want it to be the kind of car that causes you money, which means brand new.
Look in different locations.
car lots, the internet, and people whose selling. Narrowed it down a bit. make a few phone calls.
Decide what kinda car you want.
Make, model, color, and year. How many people you can squeeze in.
Doing it in the order I said you will find yourself very satisfied and you'll be cruising while your at it.
This suppose to be composition. Just want to know if I'm doing it right.
need help
This looks like a pre-write for your composition, which is an excellent idea. This looks like you have done a good job of thinking through the topic.
I would now organize your ideas in order of importance. Below is a great site for essay writing.
http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/essay/
When you have written your rough draft, please repost and one of the volunteers will be happy to give you suggestions/corrections.