Tomorrow we have several events. I'd like you to know the schedule of our school. From June 2 through June 4, second year students have a school excursion (trip), which is a kind of study tour. They have a day off on June 5th. So you don't need to go to their classes for teaching. From June 3 through June 5, seniors have a training activity. First year students have a painting contest on June 5th. So you don't need to go to their classes. However, you have to come to work or you have to go to the place where first grade stucents go for the painting contese. They usually spend, I think, the moring and afternoon there painting pictures. On June 6th, we don't come to work. It is Memorial Day on June 6th.
Are you following me? OK. Have a great weekend!
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English - SraJMcGin, Wednesday, May 27, 2009 at 2:22am
First-grade students (hyphen)
stucents = spelling = students (line 7)
contese = contest. (line 7)
moring = morning (line 7)
Otherwise, very clear!
Sra
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Thank you for your help.
I corrected them as follows.
Tomorrow we have several events. I'd like you to know the schedule of our school. From June 2 through June 4, second-year students have a school excursion (trip), which is a kind of study tour. They have a day off on June 5th. So you don't need to go to their classes for teaching. From June 3 through June 5, seniors have a training activity. First-year students have a painting contest on June 5th. So you don't need to go to their classes. However, you have to come to work or you have to go to the place where first grade students go for the painting contest. They usually spend, I think, the morning and afternoon there painting pictures. On June 6th, we don't come to work. It is Memorial Day on June 6th.
Are you following me? OK. Have a great weekend!
(Would you like to check the passage more?)
Good job!
Sra
Yes, very nice!!
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Thank you for providing the corrected version of the passage. The corrections you made are accurate and fix the spelling errors in the original passage.
To check the passage further, I would suggest reviewing the grammar and punctuation to ensure clarity and correctness. Here are a few suggestions:
1. In the sentence "From June 2 through June 4, second-year students have a school excursion (trip), which is a kind of study tour," consider adding a comma after "June 4" for better readability.
2. In the sentence "So you don't need to go to their classes for teaching," consider rephrasing it to "So you don't need to attend their classes for teaching."
3. In the sentence "They usually spend, I think, the morning and afternoon there painting pictures," consider removing the phrase "I think" as it is not necessary.
4. In the sentence "On June 6th, we don't come to work," consider rephrasing it to "On June 6th, we have a day off from work."
These are just some suggestions to improve the passage. However, overall, the passage is clear and understandable.