Please please help. French.

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Each part of France has its own type of cuisine. The French cuisine varies by season. In the summer season, salads and fruit dishes are popular and the winter and autumn seasons are the hunting seasons, foods of all kinds are eaten. There are different meals at breakfast, lunch and dinner. There are also different types of desserts. Breakfast, lunch, dinner and dessert varies depending on the region and whether the meal is eaten at a high class restaurant or not. One of the popular desserts is called Creme Caramel.

Chaque partie de France a son propre type de cuisine. La cuisine française varie par la saison. Dans la saison d'été, les plats de salades et fruit sont populaires et les saisons d'hiver et automne sont les saisons chassant, les nourritures de tous genres sont mangées. Il y a des repas différents au petit déjeuner, le déjeuner et le dîner. Il y a types aussi des différents de desserts. Le petit déjeuner, le déjeuner, le dîner et le dessert varient dépendent de la région et si le repas est mangé à un haut restaurant de classe ou pas. Un des desserts populaires sont appelés le Caramel de Creme.

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Chaque partie de (+ la) France a son propre type de cuisine. La cuisine française varie par la saison. Dans la saison d'été, les plats de salades et (+ de) fruit sont populaires et (+ dans) les saisons d'hiver et (d')automne sont les saisons chassant,(** + de chasse) les nourritures de tous (les) genres sont mangées. Il y a des repas différents au petit déjeuner, le (** + au) déjeuner et le (** + au) dîner. Il y a types (CP = **) aussi des (+ types) différents de desserts. Le petit déjeuner, le déjeuner, le dîner et le dessert varient dépendent (ort = -ant) de la région et si le repas est mangé (-or- si on mange) à (-or- dans) un haut restaurant de classe (MD = un restaurant de première classe -or- de luxe) ou pas. Un des desserts populaires sont appelés (num = because you said "one" = s'appelle ) le Caramel de Creme. (AA = è)


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Barème de correction:

ort = orthographe (spelling)
gen = genre (gender)
con = concordance (agreement of subject/verb or subject/adjective or adj/noun)
inf = infinitif (infinitive required)
nom = nombre (singular/plural problem)
prép = préposition (preposition required = à, de, en, etc.)
t = temps de verbe (verb tense)
subj.=subjonctif (subjunctive needed)
v = mauvais verbe (wrong verb)
p = ponctuation (punctuation correction needed)
voc = vocabulaire (wrong vocabulary choice)
imp.= imparfait (imperfect needed)
p/c .= passé composé needed
n/s = aucun sens (not clear what you are trying to say)
/\ = il manque un mot (Missing a word)
/\ /\ /\ = il manque 3 mots (etc.) (Missing 3 words, etc.)
M/m = changer du haut de casse/bas (Change to upper or lower case)
INT = intervertir l'ordre des mots (Change word order)
Esp. = espace (Open a space)
Sesp. = sans espace (Close up the space)
SA = sans accent (Take off accent)
NP = nouveau paragraphe (New paragraph)
EM = enlever mot (Take out/omit word)
CP = changer la position (Change position)
AA = ajouter un accent (Add an accent)
GR = faute de grammaire (Grammatical error) (Specify)
** = effacer (delete) / retirer le mot précédent (Omit the preceding word)
MD = mal dit (not well said)

NOTE: Well done! Using a preposition, it is always best to repeat that preposition with each and every noun.

Thanks so much for you help!

This is my revised version. Please check if there are any mistakes. thanks

Chaque partie de la France a son propre type de cuisine. La cuisine française varie par la saison. Dans la saison d'été, les plats de salades et de fruit sont populaires et dans les saisons d'hiver et d'automne sont les saisons de chasse, les nourritures de tous les genres sont mangées. Il y a des repas différents au petit déjeuner,au déjeuner et au dîner. Il y aussi des types différents de desserts. Le petit déjeuner, le déjeuner, le dîner et le dessert varient dépendant de la région et si le repas est mangé à un restaurant de luxe ou pas. Un des desserts populaires sont s'appelle le Caramel de Cremè.

Thank you for putting it all together because now I can see what's missing! Line 4 = d'automne QUI sont, etc. In the last sentence, delete "sont" because with that, it becomes a run-on sentence. "s'appelle" is the verb.

Et voilà! Mme

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