HI SRA JMCGUIN

CAN YOU EDIT MY RESPONSE - needs to be perfect

Assignment: Mari Luz está nerviosa y preocupada porque dentro de una semana tiene que viajar a Nueva York para participar en un congreso. Imagina que te escribe este correo electrónico ¿Qué le dices para animarla y tanquilizarla? Escribe tu respuesta.

My response: Hola Mari Luz:

No yo necesitas esta nerviosa, porquè tù conoces este material. Todo necesitas hacer es practicar tu presentaciòn en ìngles o tendràs un traductor te ayuda. Si tu relajas, seres muy facil. Ustedes (picked you for a reason, you are smart.)

To this letter: This was given to us - I had to re-type this whole letter so on this a mistake is not important - it was to show you what I was responding to: See below

Hola!

Que tal todo? bien, espero. yo, neriosisima! ya solo querdan tres dias para el viaje a Nueva York. !Aaaahhhhh!

Ya lo tengo todo preparado, la conferencia, el visado, el billete... Pero tengo laimpresion de que algo saldra mal aqui en el aeropuerto, o al
llegar a Nueva York...No se... Y como mi ingles no es muy bueno, seguro que no entiendo a nadie, ni me entienden a mi. Ademas, nunca he estado en una ciudad tan grande y inunca he participado en un congresso! Seguro que me pondre nerviosisima y que me equivocare en algo, o que me faltara un papel o un dato o algo...

Bueno, lo unico bueno que veo es que despues de mi conferencia tengo dos dias para disfrutar un poco, ver la ciudad y estar tranquila. Ya te contare.

Besos,

Mari Luz

No yo necesitas esta = basic word order is subject pronoun, negative word, verb = Yo no necesito. However, you do not want to start with "I...." but with "you."

Tú no necesitas estar nerviosa.

, porquè = no accent mark because it is not "why" but "because." tù = accent is going the wrong way; this is a French accent, not Spanish.

Todo necesitas hacer = Todo que necesitas hacer...presentaciòn en ìngles o tendràs un traductor te ayuda. = presentación en inglés o tener un traductor que te ayuda.

not "you will be easy" but "it will be easy" = será fácil

Ustedes (picked you for a reason, you are smart.) You all picked you? I don't think so! They picked you...Ellos te escogieron por una razón; eres inteligente.

Oh Goodness! I corrected the first one because I saw it first! Now I'll look at the 2nd part.

Sra

Part II. Punctuation, please! That in cludes capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, the accents, etc.

Que tal todo? bien, espero. yo, neriosisima! = ¿Qué tal todo? Espero que bien. Yo estoy nerviosísima.

ya solo querdan tres dias = Ya sólo quedan tres días (not spelling error also)

laimpresion de que algo saldra mal aqui = la impresión que algo saldrá mal aquí (3 accents)

inglés + No sé = accents

Además + a mí + nunca (not inunca) + congreso (not two s's)

I'm wasting so much time putting accent marks where they belong; you should do that!--- pondré + nerviosísima + equivocaré + faltará

único + después + días + contaré

Sra

Subject: Stay Calm and Confident, Mari Luz!

Hi Mari Luz,

First of all, take a deep breath and try to relax. You have plenty of time to prepare for your trip to New York and the conference. Remember, you are more than capable of delivering an excellent presentation!

Here are a few suggestions to help calm your nerves and ensure a successful trip:

1. Practice your English presentation: Spend some time going over your presentation, rehearsing it out loud. This will not only boost your confidence but also help you become more familiar with the content. You can even consider seeking assistance from a translator if needed.

2. Stay positive: Believe in yourself and your abilities. Remember, you were chosen for a reason. Trust that you have what it takes to succeed at this conference. Visualize a successful outcome and maintain a positive mindset.

3. Take one step at a time: Break down your preparations into smaller tasks. Focus on completing each task before moving on to the next one. By doing so, you will feel more in control and less overwhelmed.

4. Seek support: Reach out to experienced colleagues or mentors who have attended conferences before. They can provide valuable advice, tips, and words of encouragement. Don't hesitate to ask for help if you need it.

5. Plan in advance: Make a checklist of all the necessary documents and items you need to bring with you. Double-check your visa, flight details, and any other important paperwork. Being well-prepared will give you peace of mind.

Remember, Mari Luz, it's natural to feel a little nervous before such a significant event. However, try to focus on the excitement and learning opportunities that lie ahead. You have the ability to overcome any challenges that may come your way.

After your presentation, take some well-deserved time to enjoy the city and relax. You've earned it! Bon voyage, and I can't wait to hear all about your incredible experience.

Sending positive vibes your way!

Best regards,

[Your Name]