i am giving a speech tomorrow on my persuasive speech on why i think music devices should be allowed in school as long as students follow some rules.
and i was wondering if you have some opening sentences i can start with?
I just don't want to say: I'm doing my speech on music devices in school and i think.......
i want to have a more interesting opening but however i don't like openings where i ask my audience questions: like "how many of you carry ipods in your bag?" I'm not that kind of speaker.
SO PLEASE HELP ME. I'm so nervous for tomorrow, i can't think
As Lillian said so well yesterday:
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english - Lillian, Tuesday, May 22, 2007 at 7:51pm
Well, you'll have to think up the lead yourself, but if you would like to know the most common types of leads, I can give you a list:
vivid imagery
question
interesting fact
anecdote [a little story]
scenario
quotation
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You could even combine a couple -- for example, an interesting fact IN a quotation.
Let us know what you decide, and we can give you some feedback.
=)
Start your speech by playing a few notes on an instrument, or by singing. Then tell the audience that music should be allowed - just NOT THAT KIND. It will amuse, and get their attention. Then you can go on with your speech... you can finish by "threatening" to play some more <G>
I would write your speech first. Just write a bad opening line and start writing. The opening line can even be "I have no clue what I'm going to say here." Then just start talking about whatever comes to mind on the subject.
After that, go back and edit it and start to piece it together.
It's not until you have a really clear focus on what you're trying to say that you can develop a great first line. At least that's how I work.
And a secret they'll teach you in comedy that applies here. Have your LAST line be your best and your FIRST line be your 2nd best.
Matt
Here are a few ideas for opening sentences that can grab your audience's attention and set the stage for your persuasive speech on allowing music devices in school:
1. "Ladies and gentlemen, imagine walking into a classroom where the sound of music fills the air, inspiring and energizing students to learn. Today, I'm here to convince you that music devices should be welcomed in our schools, as long as we establish some reasonable rules."
2. "Good morning, everyone! As we gather here today, I want to challenge the traditional notion that music and education should be kept separate. It's time to embrace the power of music devices in our schools and witness the incredible educational benefits they can bring."
3. "Picture this: a classroom where the beautiful symphony of Beethoven accompanies every math equation and the soulful lyrics of Bob Dylan enhance our English literature discussions. My friends, it's time to allow music devices in schools and unleash the creative potential within our learning environments."
4. "Education should be a symphony of diverse experiences, and music devices have the power to create a harmonious blend of learning and entertainment. Today, I invite you to consider the positive impact that allowing music devices in schools can have on student motivation, focus, and overall academic performance."
Remember, the purpose of an opening is to hook your audience's attention, so feel free to modify or combine these ideas to make them your own. It's important to stay true to your speaking style and deliver an opening that resonates with you. Good luck with your speech!